I love this this is very the original

I feel like Lavellan is an Antivan Crow or, if not a Crow, then a member of another assassin's guild.

I personally love how your character acts to be honest with you. How she handles the people that are in game is really something different from what other people write. I also like how you write and enjoy seeing all the new chapters you put up. Hope the next one comes soon!

Very beautifully written if I do say so. I love your style of writing. I personally love your elf character, very snappy and funny at the same time. Almost choked on some water while reading this because it made me laugh a bit.

I loved this chapter (as always). The personalities of your characters shine through so well I always have a good laugh reading your story. I was very happy to find this in my inbox and I really look forward to your next update, Thank you.

I'm sick and should not be laughing but this chapter made me cackle like a witch, and that's both versions (Although I haven't actually noticed any differences in this chapter per version). I love this story! If I had the patience I'd try to do something similar (Wouldn't post it anywhere though, don't want to be accused of copyright [as such]) but I don't have the patience or the ideas to make my character's personality stand out like Banal'ras Lavellan does nor do I really want to have to research the things needed to stay within the Dragon Age lore and knowledge. (I hate researching).

I can't wait to read more (but will wait as I don't want to demand an update from anyone when I myself haven't updated any of my stories in a really long time).

Thanks for the Amazing story
Zaphy.

not sure if i reviewed this before it got edited but i love it all the same theres so many layers to Lavellans character you're doing a really great job!

Hehehe I love Será so much. Can't wait to see your OC interact with her.

Interesting...*keeps reading*

I really enjoy Solas' POVS. He's a very mysterious character, so getting a glimpse into his thoughts is always fun.

I always wondered what the advisors thought of the Inquisitor behind their back. Not that they say anything bad, but there are things you wouldn't say to someone's face, yknow? Anyway, I like that you're switching POVS. Keeps things interesting.

I am loving this re-write as much as the first. Whenever I read your work it makes me want to play the game again. As an angsty sarcastic Dalish of course. I find your writing thoroughly engaging and get completely drawn in to each chapter. I look forward to your next update. Thank you.

You're finally back! The new intro certainly puts an unusual spin on the story

I really liked the way it was going, but hey its your story, your choice! I look forward to it ;) plus i love your inquistors personality it makes it really fun to read, oh and I hope you'll do a romance between her and solas, it think it would be interesting and fun to read with his calmness and seriousness and her well roughishness (is that how you spell it? Meh) anywho! Keep up the amazing work and update soon!

Nynaeve

Thanks for the heads up. I look forward to your re-write