It's okay

It's okay feel like the anime

Hope for an update soon

Ugh this is just all over the place... ...and you keep reusing pieces of text from previous chapters. Nice idea for plot but poorly executed.

Please? Alter rebellion plz?

Try to clear up when you write. This kinda felt like a bunch of voices screaming at once

Just get to the time travel part no one care a adopt the OC's beside louces daughter

Well... At least it was a update.

boooorriiinnng tbh i completely forgot about this fic until i got a notif i only gave this fic a try to read about Lelouch having a kid and reuniting with her and Karen and having a family time and bonding but you threw us this... what ever this is... and people who i don't give a shit about gets more screen time

Huh?

Really can we get a bit more serious and get to time zero?

im looking forward to your update but please focus more on Lelouch and his family. and to move the story a little faster the main story is supposed to be about their daughter time travels to stop her fathers sacrifice right? i can't wait for her interactions with her younger parents who has no idea about the future and their daughter

CODE MENT! Why r u getting clothes in a soup store?! Also wtf is a lancer? And for another god be damned time. GRAMMAR! Otherwise fantastic chapter.

Cool story please update soon!

1your grammar sucks a**! 2 WHAT DO YOU MEAN RIN IS BETTER THAN ARTHUR? HE SHOULD KICK HER A** IN A KNIGHTMARE!