So like, most people would interpret this fairytale as referring to Victoire(is she has the Weasley hair rather than the Veela blonde) and Teddy -or- Lily and Remus... So I love that you went metaphorical rather than literal and crafted *le gasps* a Belladolphus story out of it.

Right from the start, I like that Rod is the one portrayed as being the much more passive one, a sharp contrast to her almost feral nature. The bits with him slowly submitting to the rough sex and becoming so submissive to her was actually what I really see their relationship as being, so it was quite great to see this so nicely portrayed.

Also, the ending, with him about to kill her but her just being: Bitch, be real - Classic, I loved it, and this was a really nice way to close the story, I felt.

-Ciao Mate

Amazing! I've never really read anything from this specific pairing but wow! Makes me want to go do a fic search! I loved the imagery you used to describe how Bellatrix acted. Thanks for sharing! :)