Damn that was hot ;)

This was Awesome

Freaking epic! have to admit this is probably the hottest and best written smut scene I have ever read ( and I’ve read a lot!) not just for group sex but in general. A sequel with sex toys and bondage with a seducing cloud and (maybe genesis) luring them into smexy
activities as they get home would be so amazing! Plz plz plz

Gaia damn it, that was fucking hot. Is it bad that I REALLY want to see a sequel to this?

Kinda reminds me of The Other Way Around by Bjanik. But with more partners, and condensed into a oneshot. Great story.

please make a sequal to this!

Oh. My. Minerva! *fans self and squirms* Holy Shiva's tits, that as hotter that hot! Cloud getting turned on by Zack's dirty talk was the best thing besides the actual entire thing of the four of them filling him up!

Ah so good. Good work my friend! Thanks for writing!

Steamy! ;-) I wouldn't mind a follow up story!

That was very hot
But cloud is gonna seriously need the washroom when he wakes up... ok yah... I didn't need that imagery either _
Soooo... Did the mako her absorbed? *wag eyebrows*

LOVED IT! XD I can't get over how hot your writing is! Thank you for creating this.

Holy flying monkeys. That was hot. And though Cloud's pleasure must have been through the roof, I really don't doubt that his pain was just as bad. You did a really great job writing it all, though. I couldn't decide which part I liked more because you wrote him with all of them so well.

I don't really review many fics that I read but I just wanted to say that this is one of the (quite possibly, THE) best PWP's I've ever read... The fact that this is the 17th time (trust me I've counted) that I have read this should prove that I absolutely LOVED it! Considering that, I couldn't not post a review... I can only hope that you add a couple extra chapters in the future. 3

That was worth waiting for ;P

please say your going to continue this