I wouldn't call this a weak attempt. She found a person she truly loved only to have him disappear, right? That's angsty. I would be interested to know where he disappeared to and why after their night of passion.

This was so sad. Please continue this and make Hermione happy again!

AWWWW this is sad :( please continue and I can't wait to see more works from you!

This was pretty cool. Such am interesting pairing... Good job