I agree Marion done messed up. I was definitely expecting that. I hope he can fix this soon.

Y'now, I've seen so many stories of the puppet being bad that it's kinda refreshing to see him/her being good.

I may not have that much feedback for you, except to say that I would love to see more of this!

Hey I love the story and would love to see more, it's amazing. Personally I would have Mike go back to being a kid and raise him up right at the pizzeria

Oh woe is me I need another chapter
- aaaaaaaaaaa

I sure hope Mike won’t forget too much during the week, and that Marion does his *cut due to overuse of words like f**k, sh*t, c**t, etc.* work because I’m seriously done with all his bs! *frustrated scream*
Agh, you really made me hate him right now.

I need a moment to process all that anger and anguish I feel, gosh I’m so worried for Mike...
Yeah... i-it’s gonna do for tonight, I’ll read... I’ll read more tomorrow.

From the guy who’s freakin pissed the hell off, bye!
*proceeds to break Marion’s mask brutally with a hammer before leaving*
Jac**ss.

Ps : yes, I’m pissed to THAT point.

(Second to last paragraph of the flashback, last sentence)
Their INCHES mere NOSES from each other...

WHAT

*dying from laughter*

I was scared for him, but this chapter... aaaaawwww, that’s maybe the cutest kidnapping in any FNaF fic I ever read, and yes I did say that. Tho... his probably bleeding leg, what about it?

I like it. You should come and check out my fanfiction. And make sure to leave a review on what you think.

Wait. So it just ends there!? Awwww! It was getting really, REALLY good. I really enjoyed this story! It’s one of my favorites! I’m just kinda sad that it’s not finished. I hope some day it continues on tho! That would be amazing if it did!

I'm not crying you are

This was the best story I’ve ever read...what happened to it?

Please continue I love This series

Where did this story go

Wow best story I have ever red it's SOOOOOOO unique.