Reviews for Words Can Be Such Burden
miezi10 chapter 1 . 6/13
Sequel pleas ?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30
What is the point in this ?
ASL D Brothers chapter 1 . 9/22/2019
I usually don't like to push a writer to update, but this is an exception. Please update a new chapter on the crew dealing with Luffy's death and Sanji having been the one to deal the final blow. If you're not interested anymore can you put it up for adoption or have someone else write it in your place? Thanks.
Servillius chapter 1 . 5/3/2019
Hello! This story was really great by the way! v I was wondering if You were going to make a sequel at some point at all...
Maybe. (Plez. Though it's okay if not)
Trisha chapter 1 . 9/21/2018
Would it be possible to read a sequel about how the crew dealt with Luffy's sudden stress-related death? It's definitely not something that'll be treated as sunshine, rainbows and roses.
Everlight18 chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
Wow, this is really good. Good in a way that it feels like you're ripping my heart out and I can totally see it happening in the series. All that anxiety and stress destroying him from the inside out and topping it off with a few words that was the last straw.

Great characterization! I would really like to see how the crew reacts and how Sanji's gonna deal with it since those were the last words he spoke to his captain. Did Chopper notice that Luffy's body was reacting to the stress, but didn't realize exactly what was going on until it was too late? Please write a second part to this. It doesn't even have to be very long, just to let us know what comes after this.
MVX chapter 1 . 4/15/2016
WTF?!
SecretLife93 chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
Hello! I really liked reading this... Though it took me a moment to get what Ace meant and then I almost died as the feels hit me... I would love to read a second chapter of this, of maybe the crews reactions... But if not, well it's still an amazing read
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 11/27/2015
This is interesting and really sad! I would love to see something where you showed the crew's reaction!
Ms.McClue chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
Dying of stress, what a way to go. I would love to read the crews reaction but really only if Luffy got revived by chopper. This was a really cool story so please write more.
JustHopeForHope chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
Wait.

Wait wait wait.

waitwaitwaitwaitwaitwaitwaitWAITWAITWAITWAIT WHAT

WHAAAAT.

LUFFY NOOOO

ASJDASBJDBHSA this idea is genius.

Genius, but so sad TT y u do disssss two usssss

Thank you for writing this. I had to reread it a couple times to realize what Ace meant, but WHYYYY
shinxshinx1595 chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
I never thought that I'd see/read about someone dying from stress. All until this story.

It was too good, this caught me off guard but I loved it! I guess you can say, in four different ways caused Luffy's death. One was Zoro's words, another was Usopp's leaving during Water 7, a third that contributed was the stress and sorrow over Ace dying, and the final one was the slip up with Sanji. I wish to see a second part of it, like how the crew would react to such a thing, but yet it is too beautiful, so I don't care if you don't add a second part or continue it. I truly loved it.