Nicely done. Will be happy to read more if you ever update again.

I don't think Naruto is the type to write stuff down. Or do anything involving paper and a pencil (unless it's a jutsu scroll)

I really quite like this. The only thing I have to say is keep doing what you're doing

I thought this was really good! You're already differentiating yourself from Lionheart's fic, and you've so far managed to avoid the problematic things he had. I really hope that you continue this fic. I'd be more than happy to beta for you if you wanted.

There certainly IS a GOOD "Chunin Exam's Day" fic.

Time-Braid by ShaperV

Finished/complete and very good...

I just want to say... Please for the love of GOD do not leave this story unfinished! I hate good stories that are never finished for one reason or another.

To tell you the truth... I love this story, plus I think you were able to stay true to your characters personalities. Most of all, I like the fact that this isn't a harem. That more than anything soured me to the other Chunin exam/ground hog day story because it was written more like a male sexual fantasy then a story that held any kind of depth to it.

I really hope you update soon.

I enjoyed the first chapter, you've captured Naruto's personality pretty well. Please don't listen to reviewers that ask you to make Naruto smarter or stronger, it's nice to see a fic that isn't "genius badass Anti-Konoha Naruto."

Okay, I like what your doing. You keep writing And i'll Keep reading.

this is so good, I cursed out loud when I noticed there's only two chapters. Please continue this?

The scene with Gaara was as brutal as you would expect him to act when he was introduced. Good job! Poor Sakura...

Being killed like that must be pretty horrible, no wonder that Naruto was that shocked when he woke up. I love the fact that Sasuke is paranoid enough to literally sleep with a kunai under his pillow.

Naruto proudly standing there with his pajamas... I cracked up.

Please continue this?

Much better than the story-that-should-not-be-nominated, that's for sure!

I like the way Naruto misunderstands what's happening, but after all it's just the beginning.

I like it. Non retarded Naruto probably with a slight grudge toward Gaara. I wonder if he'll keep his optimism after dying hundreds of times?

I'm really looking forward to more.

when will naruto start training?

ok. so far so good