Very, very nice opening. I must say, I'm intrigued.

i just want to say i keep having weird dreams about your char (kit). cos in my dreams i am the lost daughter..dun dun dun..of r/t and my name is loren thea (loren means crownd and thea means goddess..crowned goddess).

I

*clasps hands politely* More, please.

The stories great, keep it up. And by the way, you did a great job pulling out that

wild card to hopefully be able to talk ax (Kit being his grand-neice in all) I mean

when I read that the first like two times I was completely confused, because I had

completely forgot that Tobias was Elfangers son (hence him being ax's neice)

and sorry if I'm blabbing but like 20 seconds ago whiule I was typing this, I

had thought tobias and ax were half brothers for some reason *hits his head*

YAY!You're bringing in torelli! I loved him! "Hey Cindy Crawford you think i forgot you?" lmao great book!

Wow... I am very very confused right now, yep...

hmmm...i think i need smarter friends in the rare case this happens to me cuz the friends i have no would be like "Hmm...your parents are gone? That sucks..."

Boy, this is fun! Keep it up, I'm enjoying this to no end.

dun dun dun! The ship was a decoy! What will Kit do now? I have no idea! So hurry and update! Your fic is great! Your a talented author! Bu-Bye for now!

Chaos

Awesome! I really want to know what's up with the animorphs right now...

oh my gosh, if you dont continue this...i dont know what im going to do! this is great

what is there to say? i've said it all before. THIS ROCKS! i can't wait for the next chapter!

i wasn't the first person to review this chappie :( my computer said there wasnt a 4th chapter when there was. o well.

blugh! I still have some...bad feelings towards erek. but it was still a good chapter.

OH MY GOD! Man If I'd just found out that MY mom was THE Rachel, I would have a HEARTATTACK! This is going on my favorites list! IT'S THAT GOOD!

OMG! THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME STORY! KEEP IT GOING!