That was so perfect
Your story is amazing, their feelings are so well described, and true to their character ! This mix of friendship, desire, restrain, fun, love, I loved it !
Congratulations, obe of the best fic on this fandom :)
I was just frustrated at the end that it finishes with a promise i wanted more ! But well, I still feel bless for reading this
Thank you

This story is pretty good. Keep writing, you are talented

I (excuse my language here) fucking love this! Like damn bitch, this is awesome. I'ma read this when I am sad, lonely, suffering from a horrible day, or simply need fluff in my life. I almost passed out with happiness when it said that Gon's hand was under Killua's shirt. Like, 0.0 v *U* *drool* Yeah, a bit of fangirling happened. (By a bit I mean I died then was alive again to see/read what happens next.) I love this and everything about it. I wish it didn't end here... With all love, hope, and kindness, bye~

Really good! I like how their feelings are analyzed and described so thoroughly. That monster ruined everything for them tho :D and that slice of life is just so cute! Great job, especially with the whole bunch of metaphors. Poor babies seemed so nervous when their feelings were bottled up tho :(. Especially Killua's, he's like, internally freaking out half of the time :D.

awe this was so cute!

The end? XD
I'm so happy for them x3 and of course Gon would be excited about a monster n mystery. And I like the idea of Alluka making Killua stay with Gon xD
Love this story XD

I'm glad Gon is feeling the same way XD I wonder who will give in first? XD

I love your writing XD
Gon n Killua are just...precious n cute n ridiculous in the best of ways XD
Can't wait till part 2