| Reviews for Sins Of The Father |
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Hi chapter 1 . 7/12 Oh, yes! They got married! Squee! I usually do not read stuff with obscenities, but the mild swearing actually helped develop plot and make everyone seem more human. |
Pichooi chapter 1 . 7/12/2017 Loved it :) |
DarkUmbreon19 chapter 1 . 12/1/2016 This was really good! I liked the whole cloning thing. It was an interesting take on Jessie and Jessiebelle, plus others. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2016 THIS WAS THE BEST! I loved it! I know I'm like a year late, but please make a second one! A couple of typos maybe install grammarly! Awesome story! |
Pokemonfanthings chapter 1 . 11/17/2016 Ok. I love this. This is one of my top 5 favorite pokemon stories (Don't Give Me Diamonds by MikariStar, The Dark Side of Innocence by Anna Sartin, Stand by You by chipotlepeppers, and Heroine by chipotlepeppers are my other 4). This idea is very original, and I like how you incorporated Kalos into this and the way you distribute the text is really great. I have read this story before, and I am not sure if I reviewed it, but I just made this account today and I remembered this story and I just wanted to re-read it and then leave a review. A bit irrelevant, but I also love your Tumblr. I have to remember to reblog more of your art. -pokemonfanthings |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2016 Amazing! Really interesting idea, well played out, nice ending, absolutely loved this. |
yingyang90 chapter 1 . 7/7/2016 very good, I liked the mystery |
Loyhea chapter 1 . 6/30/2016 Wow, this is so cool! 3 |
chipotlepeppers chapter 1 . 5/28/2016 really cute. creative, a somewhat disturbing, but I like it. |
SleepyDrampa chapter 1 . 3/30/2016 Quite an interesting one-shot. I honestly love one-shots like this because they so often have ideas that I never could have thought of, but that work great for the situation. I think the whole cloning idea was very good and the way it was addressed even more so. Hadn't thought of Jessie and James being clones before but it totally works. |
Dreamer of Wings chapter 1 . 10/17/2015 Oh my God! I'm speechless! I LOVE this story! That ending litterally made me squeak with joy! I'm also impressed with the elaboration of the plot. It was both realistic and very exciting! |
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 1 . 8/19/2015 That was definitely creepy. |