UM...
chapter three? hellloooo?
LOL (: but seriously, a chapter three please?

Yeah! I loved the ending. This was a wonderful story. I enjoyed the read...thank you! :)

Hasn't been updated for a long time, eh?

Well, like Ticklesivory before me, I think you should update soon! When I first started reading this lovely fic, man was I hooked!

Please come back and continue this story!

I notice that you updated this story in December of 2002. I surely hope that you eventually intend to finish this. It is an excellent beginning.

You have a lot of talent as a writer. It is sometimes difficult as an author of fan fiction to write new dialogue for popular characters and still remain true to their distinct personalities and characteristics. You have a talent for doing that. You also have a talent for setting up and deliverying a scene. I am thoroughly enjoying reading your Obidala fiction. I see that you have written three, and I sincerely hope you plan to write more. Perhaps this review will renew the passion you once possessed for this topic, because you obviously were passionate about it at one time.

In the meantime, I am wishing you well and am thankful that you have contributed what you have to the fandom.

Great fic so far! Loving how loaded and heavy everything is, and Obi and Ami make a lurvely couple! :) More soon? Pleeease?

WOW REELI GOOD FANFIC U HAV HERE I LUUUUUUUV IT SO MUCHLY! plz keep goin i will b in to check soon!

need more

~me~

wow! hope the council wont kick him out of the order beause of that... they cant!

But he did the right thing - leaving with Padmé.

Please update soon.

I think shell meet Obi-Wan again...very soon, wont she?

And you described Anakin very well, thats really the way that I think he is.

Very good job, please keep the chapters coming soon!

Ohh, me likey. I love to see a near-evil Anakin because he is just so much more entertaining than the lovey-dovey one. An angry Anakin is a sexy Anakin too…yeah. Anyway, great story and if you plan on writing more, please do.

-Gwen-