Love it! This is great! I am happy to read a prank story on Sherlock by John. Sherlock is lucky to have a friend that can tolerate his moods and attitude. Nice to see Mycroft caring about his brothet in his own way but also understands the desire to punch him in the face.

Aw, so cute! I love how Mycroft plays the doting-but-still-willing-to-torment-his-baby-brother card. Although I have to agree with John, Sherlock deserves much worse than a slap in the face.

Great job!

Loved this! Sherlock being so worried was adorable, John you're so mean, ha ha. Mycroft was awesome here, of course he loves his brother. Good prank, although cruel. You captured their personalities spot on, really good job. Hope you write more.

Oh my. What a wonderfully written story. Kept me on edge knowing that Mycroft would have quite a lot to say if the Doctor decided to pull that stunt. Of course the Holmes would never say they cared for each other, but they show it in the best of ways that only those two could understand.
Mycroft's words hold true- John's death would shatter his little brother. But as all siblings are a little prank is fun.
Well done.

Brilliat, silly and sometimes rather daft. Very enjoyable little tale!

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A good one

good idea and very well written