Damn, I thought I reached the end, and it’s only a cliffhanger, where all the annoying asses who were not in the original DBZ still breathes. Wishing all of the people to come back alive because of an invasion should be a good enough reason to use the dragon balls.

Drama is the correct genre for this, everyone are such hypocrites, they’re monsters hating on others for being different when they themselves are.

It would have been better if all the circle people all died...

Throughout this story, I felt like most the earthlings living on that earth needs to learn some manners, learn to be grateful they didn’t die when they are such dumb asses who keeps antagonizing their saviors. Including Videl and Serona or whatever her name was. Dende’s the best, although he’s a pushover..

It’s great that you’re writing your own book. Congratulations, hopefully you don’t have a character like the bunny in there. Someone should really torture him.

I did not like how Senoya reacted, but it’s understandable. It’s bed for Dende though.

Bringing back the tail, so this story is about race.

I agree with what one of the reviewers said, the rabbit needs to die; and I don’t even know what he’ll do yet.

I like you Senova, she’s nice, one of the nicest person in your story so far, she has a great background too. And that reminds me of how badly everyone seems to be to her. Then Gohan, nice people just get shit on :/ . Hopefully the story gets happier.

If this is Z only, will you introduce Buu? It seems like you’ve got Broly in that cave, which would be pretty good, not for the main villain though.

Damn, that Thalia girl, I don’t know what to think of her. He has “good intentions” but all she does is makes things worse, all of them circle ppl. Talking about why did the Z fighters not al go in to fight(totally legitimate question by the way) when their group of people didn’t dare to even show up.

I take back what I took back before, kill all the circles Vegeta! Seriously, they all seem like hypocrites that needs to be gone.

Hopefully no Gohan and Dende, I saw them more as a bro for life kind of thing.

Thank you for having some silliness, usually most authors here usually make their stories very one dimensional. I also take back what I said about someone slaughtering the Circle’s entire group, although they are still asses. And are most definitely cults, not religious.

Your story is pretty well thought out, as well as your characters. This world is pretty depressing so far, most of the characters are hypocrites. Hopefully we’ll be seeing some character growth, I’ve kind of got the feeling that everyone loves talking some sort of shit about Gohan, even he has started figuring out ChiChi thinks he’s a pushover. A lot of the characters are asses though, (in my opinion obviously) I really feel like it would have been better if someone slaughtered Thaila and their flame people.