Can't wait for the next update really good story so far :)

I'm really like the revise it's like a new story!
But do you think you could try making longer chapters?
I absolutely can't wait for the new chapter .
Update soon
Littleheartache

Surprisingly, it's a fairly good story. I won't say it perfect, since I'm sure both of us know it isn't. It is, however, something you should be proud of. The plot is a bit rushed, and you didn't show nearly enough people wondering where Sydney went and if she was a Death Eater. I'm assuming you'll turn the next portion into a sort of read-the-story format to show what happened in Greece. Is she part of the Seven? If so, who was kicked out? If not, was she left behind to deal with the Romans? Or did you change it to the Eight?(I strongly advise against changing the Prophecy) If you already have it all planned out, that's great. Sydney has sudden mood-swings, which you should watch out for. Don't overdo any humor or attempted badassness. And that's about it. Good luck.

I enjoy the newer story so, much. You had improved so much, in your writing, so did I. I enjoy your stories, so much. Keep on writing and kudo's. I understand absences( school is my excuse). Can't wait to look forward, for your next updates.