I really enjoyed the concept of the story and how Corrin has more personality like she’s more impatient and childish. But, there’s some inconsistencies in the story like the switching of Corrin to Kamui and Kaze to Suzukaze. I hope that you eventually have Corrin interact with Leo and Elise.

This is fun. It's nice to see Corrin have some dragon fire, and Xander go toe-to-toe with it. I hope this isn't dead

I am loving this story so far, but it makes me sad to see that it hasn't been updated in almost two years. :( Hope to see it come back again!

Yes, I can't imagine Kamui twittering about shoes; she seems to have such a disdain for them. Actually, now that I think about it, Aqua doesn't eat them either, does she?

I like how he still calls her "little princess" even in this setting where they didn't grow up together. Also Iago is just that evil, Marx distrusts him from the start.

Nice.

You seem to switch names quite frequently. Was this written pre-localization and then clumsily rewritten with the new names?

I absolutely love this story and I really hope you're going to update it again!

Marx and Kamui is my favorite shipping so I hope you continue toake this a great story

I know you haven't updated in a while, but if you do continue this story, I want to put my vote in for Kamui and Marx as the pairing :)

I like what you have so far, especially how I feel the hatred for Garon (among others). To be able to feel a character's feelings is what makes me enjoy reading, so I enjoyed this story thus far. I hope you continue :)

I love this story so much! please continue, theres not many stories on this ship and I'm dying xD

I love this story. I love that the chapters are long. I love how you write the characters. I love your writing. Not gonna lie about this last chapter, I am feeling a little bad for Marx but I still can't wait to see what happens when he finds out Kamui didn't listen to him. I'm also looking forward to other possible character appearances. *cough*Joker*cough*
And this game comes out tomorrow? Can you believe it? We'll be able to marry serious prince Marx. This story really helps distract me from the excitement of the game's release. I live for the Marx/Kamui pairing! (Well I actually like a lot of pairings) This story is amazing and I can't wait for more! :D You're doing an awesome job! KUDOS!

This is so interesting! I love how you've written the characters so far! Great work! I'm SO looking forward to the next chapter and for the game to come out in the US! Urgh. February feels so far away! I've already spoiled myself- I still enjoy games eitherway, so it's fine. Hahaha

Kamui at the end, though. WHYYYY? She really shouldn't have taken it. Oh no
I'm seriously curious about what's gonna happen next now!

I still saying that I love it a lot, but it is really interesting how Marx and Kamui really don't like each other, but I want to ask you...the relationship between Marx and Kamui will be getting better? Because I would love to see them getting well, at least well.

Yeeees! So happy to see an update from you!

Just want to start off by saying that I really enjoyed the first part of the chapter with the interaction between the Hoshido sisters. It's funny how Mikoto mentions that Kamui has not spent a moment with her sisters since they arrived in Nohr, and even though (as the reader), I noticed that, it really just hits home how things have been spiraling out of control for Kamui. It also really points out how self-centered Kamui has been the past few chapters, but of course she has not quite descended from her high horse yet. I anticipate that this will make her fall that much harder.

The intrigue and drama is definitely ramping up what with this whole "secrets being kept from each other" theme, and I can't wait to see how things play out between Kamui and Hinoka. I like the tension between them, especially since they have such opposite personalities. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see when things will blow up... And I'm especially interested to learn what Marx promised Hinoka.

Speaking of Marx, I'm also looking forward to finding out what plan he has up his sleeve, especially now that Iago's creepy drawings have made their way into the picture. (But seriously Kamui, I wanted to slam my head into my desk when you took the drawing!)

Also, I wanted to mention that I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more of Aqua. I like the background that you gave her which differentiates her from the other royal siblings (also nice call-back to the canon Kamui). I also like her quiet but stubborn personality and I actually really hope that her and Kamui will become like best friends, haha.

Overall, I thought that this was a great set-up chapter. I also think that it was wise that you kept them as one chapter. I think I can take a guess at where you may have wanted to split the chapter, but I actually thought that they transitioned well enough. And it also kept up the tension between Kamui and Hinoka's secret keeping, which might have been lost with a chapter split.

Anyway, as usual, I very much look forward to the next chapter! Good luck with your writing!

P.S. I don't have an A03 account, but I do browse around there and stumbled upon your account! Now, out of curiosity, but also because I (not so) secretly hope that it was THAT kind of dream (because it would be great), is there a possibility that Kamui's "strange dream" could make its way into your "FE14 Drabbles" on AO3? ;)