Yo no ayudaria a Itachi si quiere salvar a Sasuke que lo haga solo despues de todo es el culpable por lo que paso, puede matar a Orochimaru para salvarlo asi el fic se haria mas increible, quiero que Naruto siga viajando sola tal vez deberia ir a Uzushiogakure por un tiempo para aprender mas Fūinjutsu. Que Sasuke sepa lo que paso a Naruto cuando lucha con Itachi y el comienze a buscarla despues. Espero que pronto actualices.

Hope you haven't given up on this fic it's pretty interesting and well written~

Its hard to find a decent fem naru fic around here and i hope you'll continue this.
Till next time~

Sabes me gustaria que Naruto niegue lo que Itachi le este proponiendo y se olvide de Sasuke por lo que le hizo. Espero que pronto actualices

Nicely done :) I wonder what she will decide.

Were you hinting at her still wanting to be hokage when she was jealous? I hope not, i dont want her dream to be becoming the hokage

Welcome to reality it's weirder then fiction Naruto .

She and sasuke should just run away together to somewhere, away from orochimaru and the village

Great so far, I look forward to reading more in the future.

What does hoka mean?

waaaa

Good story so far. The feelings ad thought of the characters, the two main ones in particular, are well described and sound right. I don't think that anyone save perhaps Sasuke realized but he and Naruto was very much in love and his betrayal broke her heart and his too. Naruto stopped trying and come to believe nobody cared for her. Sasuke realized that the distance and absence didn't help, she's still in all his thoughts.

Sasuke is a cad, he stole Naruto's first kiss and her second first's kiss !

I'm absolutely obsessed with your story please update soon I can't wait.

can't wait for sasuke and naruko to meet up

nice update...

Good update, I think she should be paired with Gaara though