| Reviews for The Difference of an Egg |
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   CookiemonstaWasTaken chapter 16 . 6/10 Dude I fucking guessed it i only guessed vulpix because it's my favorite aloan for |
| CookiemonstaWasTaken chapter 15 . 6/10 The aloan pokemon is gonna be a aloan vulpix |
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/22 Doesnt ashes pokemon go to his moms ranch instead of prof. Oaks lab? Also didnt charmander ecolve into charmeleon like 2 chapters ago? |
| dcfer chapter 9 . 10/25/2019 The reference on chapter nine is to one punch man. It's half of saitama's training regime with the adition of the move part |
| Guest chapter 17 . 9/26/2019 You should continue is story it's really good. |
| Toby Hark chapter 17 . 4/6/2019 I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer! |
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/14/2019 Really do wish you came back to this. Annoyed how you just gave up |
| LordAsh-Greninja chapter 17 . 1/20/2019 I love this fanfic. That's the shortest way to say it. This is my fourth time reading it and I decided to ask you if I could adopt it since you abandoned it, with credit to you of course. So please, please let me have the pleasure of continuing and hopefully finish it. |
| timberwolfst chapter 6 . 12/6/2018 Pikachu knows all of those moves but doesn't know iron tail yet? I would think he'd need to know that before the electric hammer and blade versions. I'm curious how Aura can create solid objects. Or at least permanent ones. A blade or weapon I could understand, but crystals? |
| timberwolfst chapter 5 . 12/6/2018 Oak raises his limit to 10, then his DeX says he can carry 9. |
| timberwolfst chapter 4 . 12/6/2018 Regarding your challenge, I have an idea for a story that meshes fairly well with it. Some differing points to run past you: does the egg have to be found on the beach (I suppose so if the mother stays with Delia), does the "official" starter need to be one of the actual starters or just his first designated pokemon, and is the skates/bike thing non negotiable? (Skates would only be useful in a city, and a bike would leave his traveling companions behind. I'm more partial to the offroad skateboards used in that race in the Johto region, or, even better, ride pokemon) |
| timberwolfst chapter 2 . 12/6/2018 I know you've abandoned this story already, but it bears pointing out in case you use it in another one that food is organic. You might want to change the description of the backpack to say "non-living" items. |
| Tilty.bbb chapter 17 . 9/8/2018 This was a fantastic read well done |
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/24/2018 So um. Will you be rewriting this or returning to ANY of your stories? |
| masterjohn2 chapter 8 . 6/29/2018 didn't charmander evolve last chapters. why is he still a charmander in the battle against brock |
