well written. made me laugh

Great story, I love the idea of him not being able to finish until they are wholly mentally linked as well, that is really what sold me on and will keep me coming back to this. Also wonderful writing. Keep it up!

Really enjoyed this except for the part when the Doctor called Rose's period disgusting. Otherwise, great fic. I particularly liked how Rose took such good care of him his first time.

Oh the ending but killed me, I was literally laughing out loud my mother thought I was going insane XD It was a prefect ending :3

This was actually good for it to be your first time at writing adult scenes. Especially how you handled this being the first time for the Doctor, that was actually quite adorable. Anyway this was great, teasing Rose is the best XD