So did you write a sequel?

Is choking on laughter from the omake*

i want to reade the sequeal and btw this was HILARIOUS!

lol i love it and cat wait for more!

this last chapter, i find extremely insulting. it also didnt make any sense at all...overall, it was good 5/5, but when u write nonsense at the end of any story, it automatically becomes a 0/5

That last bit is extemely wierd and is an insult to sessomaru lovers he would never do that!

thats awesome do you have the sequel up now?

interesting fic. Not sure about ch. 5 though... I couldn't quite understand it. But I liked the other chapters.

this was really good i'll be looking for the sequal right now

great story so far, please update soon

I liked this!

Oh, this was awesome. I love the parodies you added in at the end - Sesshoumaru riding a bycicle has to be the funniest thing I've ever seen. The 'squeaksqueak' did me in. I could totally picture it.

And I swear Inuyasha's dreams were probably the most hilarious things I've ever read in a fic. Seriously, that was perfection. It made Inuyasha's presence in the fic more prevalent and interesting than in most fics you read where he's not one of the main two characters.

That was just too funny.

Faerlyte

Lol. I especially enjoyed the little Sesshomaru on a bike bit! That was my favorite! I have never seen anyone make fun of their own stuff before, and I just love it. Kudos. Can't wait to read what happens next!

love it

This shit is oddly entertaining.

I love the story, especially when Kagome beats Lord Stick-Up-His-Ass.

The omake ROCKS!