I'm sorry I've mistaken I put the comment on the wrong story (Dark Horse) so I'm gonna put it here anyway because you deserve it :
A very good story, refreshing! Like the set up and all, I enjoyed reading it and the story is really really cool, maybe because it doesn't imply all the complexity of the main quest but is still there anyway... It would be great if your "Choose your ship" library was complete but it's already good so... Great job !

Just saying this before moving on to the next story, I love this, very very unique and new _

I LOVE the set up! YES!

Awesome idea for a story. Great work.

I like this, it is well written and entertaining. I don't know why you don't have more reviews honestly.

I'm really looking forward to the whole Alduin section now! Reminds me a little of Dragonrend, except I like you're female dragonborn better (shhh!) xD.

Also, just a question - but when the sections come, will they tie into the other sections? Like, will there be love triangles or something? Or will the section be focused on them only?

I really like the story.
Can your make her a couple with either Alduin or Paarthurnax or Miraak?
Please keep writing.

This is just so original and great I can't stop fangirling oh my gooooooodododododoododododiequhebwjahqj2.

I absolutely love your characters. Amazing. Beautiful. I love YOU.

This is so good so far! I'm so excited for you to post more. c: