Kyaaa! I'm fangirling together with Yashiro now!

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THAT WAS TOTALLY WHAT I DID NOT EXPECT!

OH MY GOD! OMG!

Seriously? He did that? Wasn't able to hold my loud laugh at that hahahahaha

Rofl! That is hilarious! Great idea!

Bruh that is so gross yet boss.

You have to make a part 2. With everyone's reactions. Lol. Pm me if you do.

Ahhahahahaha Ren not only indirectly kissed Kyoko but also Sho! Hahaha

o/O Oh dear. This is quite what I'd imagine Ren doing and am very surprised that it wasn't canon.
[and a triumphant thrill went through him at her acceptance of his possessive actions.] so Ren, so cute, so /yashiro squeals. You totally need to write more SB fanfiction.
His super sparkly smiles should come with a warning cause he always does something silly after that. :P
This is vvv cute and adorable. Great job! :D

Too awesome xD made ma laugh!

I LOVE REN AND KYOKO! :(v):

Ewww! Gross! Bad Ren!
That last part had me gagging and coughing, just...No.
But I guess it was sweet that he loved her enough to eat her spity chocolate.
But I'd never be able to look at him the same way after that.

Odd but cute. Nice story :)

TT This is so cute, I wish this had happened in the actual manga. Wonderful job.

I was speechless at first, then I was like: "*scoffing sound* heh heh"

JAJAJA... esto habría sido Genial ! me fascinó...XDXDXD