Reviews for Why Does it Hurt?
SN22 chapter 1 . 2/19
Edward...
it's really possible to starve yourself, :3
so sweet
iEliteRoyale chapter 1 . 2/15
I love this unique approach to FMA! Along with your writing style, the plot makes this story really interesting and original!
Charis chapter 1 . 9/5/2018
Loved this! Loved the hurt/comfort and the descriptive, real pain with Edward- I wish there was more! Great work!
Lunaleen1 chapter 1 . 6/19/2018
Woah this was SO GOOD. I am Literally in tears. This is something that Edward would definitely do, he cares so much about his brother that never thinks about himself

And Roy, telling him he worries about him and he is proud...too much...my heart cannot handle it...this is one of my favorite FMA pieces...part of me wishes it was longer but why mess up with perfection?!.
theGamabunta chapter 1 . 2/14/2018
10/10 would cry again
Hyourinmaru Kills chapter 1 . 1/10/2018
YESILOVEDITTTT
eroticamegido chapter 1 . 10/3/2017
10/10 would recommend, thank you
Akarri chapter 1 . 3/2/2017
This was a wonderful read and I'm very glad I found it! :D This may have been written years ago, but I wanted to say that in regards to your AN at the end, I think the FMA fandom is still going strong, even if we're not as loud as some. _ I can never get enough of this good ol' family angst.
Thank you for writing this!
fluffykitty12 chapter 1 . 1/9/2017
Gorgeous! :)
kalluuto chapter 1 . 10/27/2016
omg i loved this so much thank you! just the right about of angst for my trashy heart. i live off of parental roy and this was great! such a unique concept that hasn't been done before.. GREAT JOB :)
BenSolo'sGirlfriend chapter 1 . 10/5/2016
Awwwwwwwwwwww...
Yuffie's Ninja Insanity chapter 1 . 9/29/2016
YASSSSS! This was amazing! Thank you so much, #fmafandomneverdie
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2016
Tha was really good!
aT chapter 1 . 5/15/2016
oh my goooddddddd this is awesome.

I was (more than) a bit terrified for Ed as everything was going on o_o and your descriptions of what Roy was absorbing when the medics rushed in is really really fantastic- panic mode tunnel vision stuff.

The whole "cause" of it was a really wicked twist, and you did a really good balance of not ever explaining by having the doctor mention and phrase everything the way he did.

Alphonse. ; _ ; That. The whole dawning realization stuff too. Hoooo boy. What a sweet ending though, its calm and relaxed and bery much feels like the begining of a healing road kind of thing

Its very well written and I am sooo shocked I didn't find it earlier! I've been reading FMA almost non stop for nearly a year now. Better late than never- and i am soooooo glad I did find it.

Thank you very very much for sharing it, you really put a lot of time and energy in to it and it is awesome! Thank you!
EirSensei chapter 1 . 2/4/2016
Awesome story. Just what I needed
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