How cute.I liked job.-

Oh, a funny and kinda sweet story.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

This was really funny, and I found myself enjoying it. RaiKim's so adorable, and I loved the ending Haha!

Really cute story! The Love-Wu idea has been done several times, but your execution is the best one I've seen. I loved Omi's dialogue, especially; almost everything he said made me giggle! You had him absolutely nailed.

You pointed out in the footnote that you intentionally made both the fight scenes pretty short, but I think the water tag showdown suffered for it. It felt rushed for me. Where was Raimundo? I didn't expect him to actively participate, but disappearing entirely seemed pretty odd, especially since he suggested the competition in the first place.

The ending was adorable. Raimundo was genuinely sweet without being out-of-character, which is so refreshing to see! Really great job!