I love this story sooo much! Truly one of the best NarutoxMeixMikoto fics of all time. Hopefully the added girls to the harem don't hurt the established relationship core. I personally vote for NaruYugito and NoFuuforyou and almost think Temari would make for sense for menma than for Naruto. So excited to have found this fic and so excited for what's next. Very enjoying MenmaxInoxSakura too but absolutely adore Mei and Mikoto's mother like aspects. I do say w/ ShiSui's death, Izumi could have still been alive as her death didn't appear as necessary.

Truly one of the best and most well thought out Naruto fics i've seen. Ignore the hate, keep up the amazing work. Super excited to see what's next.

Good chapter i vote for Mabui :)

but about CRA, how can Naruto and Menma get that? consirering there is still two member of Uzumaki-Namikaze instead of one

and for me it's pretty weird about Sakura considering in Canon Naruto only longing for attention and Sakura can be considered to giving him those attention in another forms, but i can't see Menma being like that considering he have those family of his then again we can just said that he is just being an Uzumaki and that is an idiot, then again i like Sakura but only after Shippuden when she is grown up as character, when she still a child? meh

well that thing you said about not being useless and pumped a damn heart need to take a few years before she even can do that, the whole childhood arc she is pretty damn useless except for a gag character just like Hinata need to take a few years and a Pein to grow a spine

Good story and writing, honestly though I often find myself glancing over the parts of Menma and the younger ones in favour of finding what’s going on in regards to Naruto. I personally just don’t have a ton of interest in the younger brothers story. I picked this story up because it’s not often you see Nar/Mikoto, or Naru/Tayu stories, and so far the romance has been really good. Aside from that, I’d vote Naru/Mabui, considering she is a character that is under appreciated when it comes to FF

NARUMABUI

NARUYUGI

Naruyugi

i'll vote for NaruYugi.
I really enjoyed this fic, update whenever you can, i'll be waiting

Narufuuuuu pleeeaaase!

Writing feels pretty choppy bouncing from place to place with little rhyme or reason. Not bad per say just kind drifting off. Naruto should be older than Itachi at this point. Itachi is 5 years older than Sasuke

awesome update! I completely understand not sticking to a schedule.. it's too stressful to do that. I know that myself as a writer. Keep up the great work

naruto samui / yugito memma fuu

Hey,

I'd rather like to see NaruKarui in a - what i know woukd be a really well written manner, since done by you - but apparently my fellow readers are too taken by the Cloud Womans ginormous mammaries to look at their faces. As such i'll regrettably switch to Mabui, as she simply is a close second in the overall looks department.

Well since you Menma with Ino - my favourite pairing - it would only be fair to add Fuu to the mix, since she also is clearly in tge top five for a naruto Pairing...

Regards,
Shadow

Naruyugi