Can you please continue his story?! Please! Alison has to tell the girls about the messages. It shouldn't be like the show where she gets herself almost killed for not telling anyone! And she should ask Emily if she has feelings for her. They need to figure those feelings out. And Emily needs to tell the girls about Paige, like fast! I bet Paige is threatening to tell that Emily is gay. Please continue this story! I love it and I really want to read more chapters! I'll be damned if you don't let the world see how great of a writer you are! Because seriously you are great! Please update soon, even though it's been awhile! So please update soon! :) ;) - Munro McLaren
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Hey! This is a really interesting Emison story! Are you planning on coming back?

Keep writing! I want Emily to tell the girls that she's possibly gay well at least she should tell Alison and she should tell Alison about what happened with Paige. Oh and she should mention that she likes someone and Ali asks who. But keep writing more chapters! I want to know what happens next! :)

I think Spencer and Aria should be straight and date Toby and Ezra. But what's done is done.

oh my god this is my new favorite story. i love love love it! please update soon

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I likes this chapter. So we got to see emomy swimming and all the girls there supporting her. Then we got to see the interaction between Spencer and Ali that was something. Them we see Ali busting Spencer for kissing Melissa's boyfriend. Keep going

Awe I loved this chapter!

The last bit is really awkward using "they" and "their" and "them" so we don't know gender. It would be better if you'd put more thought into writing it without have to use those terms. It's a copout.

Awe my emison feels lol great chapter can't wait until your next update!

i think A should make Emily disappear, kinda like a role reversal from the show. That would be cool to see how timid Emily handles the streets on her own.

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I like this chapter. It was Interesting. So at first we see Ali and Spencer talking about Emily. The we see emily and Ali and Ali makes the does tmove and hold Emily's hand and gets mad when Emily mentions that pigskin has hurt her. The. we see Hannah and Emily trying to figure out Emily's feeling's. The. We see A trying to make Spencer choose between emily and Ali. That's something. Keep going. Yes I want Emily to stand up for herself

Loved it all! Cute emison moment

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Wow this story is quote something. Bit I like it. So we see all the girls chilling and hanging. Then we see emily and Ali having their awkward moment. And then we see Ali and Spencer havk f their moment where spncer is giving advice. I would like to see sparia in there and the rest of the couples. But keep going and Paige have be nice

Love it! And the Spalison! It's what I've always wanted on the show!

I think if the story is pre-disappearance, then it would be best to leave Spoby/Haleb out just because they haven't been introduced as love interests yet. Although, Toby himself could make an appearance like with Jenna or with Emily being his neighbor!

Anyways, I really love this story so far. I love seeing inside Ali's brain!

I'm loving this story :) I think Paige should be A and cause emily to disappear instead of Ali lol I never liked Paige until they brought Sara on the show lol