Great fiction :D I really want to read the next chapter!

Cute story! somehow I really do hope that Bellamy joins the Strawhats

That was cute.
lol I never thought I could use "cute" while speaking of Bellamy! XD
I liked how the Strawhat tried to make him feel better on their own way. So friendly.
I'm glad I'm not the only one thinking Bellamy had great chance to become the next Strawhat crewmember.
I saw some mistakes but nothing too big.
It's a good little OS you had here, I'm happy I found it, there are not enough storry on Bellamy, he raeally deserve some love.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.