So... NO rewrite then? Oh well... Thanks for the fic.

Naruto's digging himself into a pretty deep lie... Unless you plan to never have him reveal his true origin?

Question, just a little observation. Would Wendy really dip out after a few hours looking for her "mother" to travel with a stranger? I mean I am not at all trying to be rude, but that feels a little off to me.

And also don't forget to add Lightning release too.

Why don't you also add Rinnegan,Storm Release,Yang Release and Yin-Yang Release too? That would be more interesting.

PLEASE GIVE ME MORE AHHH YOU NEVER REWROTE IT

Can’t wait for the next chapter! UwU

hey you said few hours and its been like 10 months now and still no rewrite...

i know there are already more chapters out but meh i will still give ya suggestions... well you can have orecian seins target wendy to heal jellal and for some reason naruto not being able to help her and then have naruto find brain just about to put his aword through wendy's throat his sword being exactly 1 inch away and naruto knowing he is too late and achieving rinnegan or rinne sharingan and time slowing down and him saving wendy. will naruto getting rinne sharingan makes more sense then him getting rinnegan. you see madara took so long to awaken rennegan was because he had first cultivate hashirama cells and than plant them into himself than train and it took a while cause his senju cells were implanted on ther hand naruto is an uzumaki(a.k.a seju)and uchiha from blood and he also has hashirama cells including enerygy and teaching of sage of six paths logically speaking it should be pretty easy for him to get rinne-sharingan in fact he should have awaken it right after sage started naruto teaching ninshu.

ayyyyyy i want miss fiore(princess) x naruto.

you know i am a sucker for naruto x erza and mira. but one of them works i guess.

ohhhh! i hope naruto could use hirashin ahahaha it would have been managed to go to other side before gildarts even knew what happened and naruto looking at gildarts smugly.

you this is a good idea of giving naruto rinne sharingan in tower of heaven arc. or maybe against achnologia, tho i still think someone with ems and mukoton should be able deal with achnologia.

for someone who was probably the strongest to walk on the elemental nations all fighting styles should be atleast S rank with ninjutsu and taijustsu SS rank. why? cause he learned from THA MADARA. let me remind you madara showed middle finger to all shinobi forces and beat the crap out of them in a almost taijustsu battle. naruto at this point should be much stronger than his prime in elemental nations because of the years his body got younger... and being a uzumaki/uchiha and senju should easily give him rinnegan and as already have ems he should be able to get rinne sharingan because he is part uzumaki which is relative of senju. also you used child of prophecy in titles if i remember correct menma was the child of prophecy in your story and naruto was the destroyer.

Looks like the rewrite isn't happening. If I'm wrong though I hope you pay more attention to Naruto being a teacher and maybe not just to his guild members. An open crowd competition for disciples maybe? That threadline had me hooked from the moment it appeared and I think it was a shame you focused more on fight scenes then you did character development. I would say one thing you absolutely got right was allowing Naruto to have fame and respect. Too many stories ignore that part when writing about characters that really should be well known. Everything immediately turns antagonistic and it's like stories of what the character's done HAVEN'T spread. Always thought it was weird.