I BEG OF YOU PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!

I loved this story too!

i hate the cullen

i love this story so much~! waiting for your next update 3

OMG NEED AN UPDATE. UGH THOSE CULLENS. #TEAMEDEN

I. Hate. Isabella. And. The. Cullens. *******! ****** little ******* that deserve to just go **** themselves into ****** oblivion! And yes, that was mild. I really hope that Eden and Alec leave soon, I can't bare to keep seeing her ******* family(that should be in italics) treating her like jack****! Also hope Renesmee she's how bigoted and ******* her family is and leaves them and makes it up to Eden, even though I know she wouldn't. *****.

Glad she's finally getting to leave. We'll see what happens
Update soon

Holyyyyyyy Jesus I always try to look at both sides for books but naw I can't with Cullens I just egging cant-_- But anyway loved the chapter! Can't wait for more!

I love this story. Maybe because I've always hated the Cullens since their so self important anyway I love the way you've written you character.

Damn the Cullens are assholes... (pardon my language) like srsly Eden saved Nessie n this is what she what type of mom are you ! Eden's ur daughter too! Oh for goodnees sake,i irritated with the Cullens. Anyways, love this story and I can't wait for your next update!

The. Cullens. Are. Asses. To put it simply. Also, Alec rocks! Though I am curious, he and Eden are mates, right? And it's amazing how protective she is of her 'family' despite the fact that they basically hate her and have made her life a living hell. Even now, they blame her for everything and hate her for killing, never stopping to wonder if they know her at all, or why she killed them, why it was necessary. I repeat, asses. Dumbasses!

You are such an amazing writer! This story is amazing from the original character to the details.

It's refreshing that Eden and Alec didn't fall head over heels in love with each other at first sight. I also like how you have written Alec's character. You have written him how I always imagined he would speak and act.

Incredible job!

I love this story! It's intense and well written and Eden is just amazing. You've captured her quiet contemplation and her killer instinct perfectly and wrapped it in a façade of beauty and innocence. I've never seen an OC quite like her.

I've read my fair share of Renesmee twin sister stories, but I have to tell you, yours is on a whole other level. None of the cliche bitterness between siblings or physical abuse is here and I think that's wonderful. The Cullen's are vampires after all, they have no need for violence against someone they wish to punish. The way they coldly isolated her is just so them and I applaud you on getting their characters so on point.

Her budding romance with Alec is definitely a breath of fresh air. The idea that he's so well versed and open towards her is more understandable than if he acted like some broody teen. You've made him seem like a truly mature immortal and that's hard to do.

I'd love to read more; especially to see the Cullen's, Renesmee, and Alec's reactions to Eden's display of raw power and control. I'm pretty sure Alec's gonna be impressed and the Cullen's beyond pissed.

Anyway, lovely story and I can't wait to read more. Cheers!

I've fallen in love with your writing! I can't wait to see what happens next, do you know when the next chapter will be up? I need to know, it's so good!~

*cough* WhattheyshoulddonewithVictoriaJamesandLaurent *cough* Awesome chap, glad to see Eden learned something new. And BADASS! You go girl! But I do wonder what the Cullens will think now *Monster! Monster!*, idiots. Really hope they realize how stupid they are before it's too late, though I think it already is. Will Alec be worried over his mate? (She is his mate, right). Loved it. Thanks.