Reviews for naruto: the path
Hoans chapter 1 . 6/30
Since he can have multiple bloodlines then why not add the sharingan to make it evolve till rinne-sharingan too?! This whole SH1T about those having Doujutsu not training again to only use their eye powers is complete BULLSH1T! If he knows that most Doujutsu users greatly depends on their Doujutsu then he himself can just train in all aspects!
anon chapter 15 . 11/17/2017
Hope you finish it. You might also consider getting a beta to proofread your text as there are a lot of grammar errors. The story itself though is fun.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/17/2017
Gray lord is veeery close to Gay lord. Just sayin'
fictionelement777 chapter 15 . 6/4/2017
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH! I'm gonna love the next chapter!
CoffeeTime987 chapter 14 . 1/5/2017
Last chapter what? why?
fictionelement777 chapter 14 . 1/1/2017
WOAH WOAH! You're ending it all after the next chapter? Awwww and you had a good thing going!
Narutochi chapter 1 . 9/25/2016
There is one more skill you could have given him ranmaru's dojutsu.
It has the ability to disrupt other dojutsu like byakugan.
fictionelement777 chapter 13 . 9/25/2016
Yay! Good that you're back and I dig the latest chapter! Can't wait for the next!
CoffeeTime987 chapter 12 . 5/20/2016
This chapter made me laugh more, I enjoyed it a lot. Find Tsunade :D
moops chapter 12 . 5/18/2016
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trynmailme chapter 12 . 5/18/2016
It was a great chapter... Plzz continue
ShadowofDeathsveil chapter 12 . 5/18/2016
Oh my god you dirty tease with that little cliffhanger there. Now I can't wait for your next update. Oh and everything is amazing love the work.
CoffeeTime987 chapter 11 . 4/26/2016
Maybe you can interact with the teams you affected? Like how Neji's dad is still alive since you nipped that in the bud or if his dad ended up dying in a different way, You know? If the characters you saved die anyways just in a different way than in the manga.
Just a thought, also good work I'm still enjoying it!
fictionelement777 chapter 11 . 4/3/2016
Teach naruto seals and sword techniques and chakra chains and plz make him smarter. Other than that, this story is making excellent progress in my opinion. Why it has so little reviews I don't know. But keep up the good work and try contacting and pming other members of FANFICTION to let your story be known to others.
wahyubison chapter 11 . 4/3/2016
well with kabuto running from konoha you must think AU story
well in 1 month naruto will be stronger and smarter from canon verse in chuunin exams with tutoring from haruki
well you can make haruki 2nd stage proctor to kill orochimaru
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