| Reviews for naruto: the path |
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Hoans chapter 1 . 6/30 Since he can have multiple bloodlines then why not add the sharingan to make it evolve till rinne-sharingan too?! This whole SH1T about those having Doujutsu not training again to only use their eye powers is complete BULLSH1T! If he knows that most Doujutsu users greatly depends on their Doujutsu then he himself can just train in all aspects! |
anon chapter 15 . 11/17/2017 Hope you finish it. You might also consider getting a beta to proofread your text as there are a lot of grammar errors. The story itself though is fun. |
Guest chapter 4 . 11/17/2017 Gray lord is veeery close to Gay lord. Just sayin' |
fictionelement777 chapter 15 . 6/4/2017 OOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH! I'm gonna love the next chapter! |
CoffeeTime987 chapter 14 . 1/5/2017 Last chapter what? why? |
fictionelement777 chapter 14 . 1/1/2017 WOAH WOAH! You're ending it all after the next chapter? Awwww and you had a good thing going! |
Narutochi chapter 1 . 9/25/2016 There is one more skill you could have given him ranmaru's dojutsu. It has the ability to disrupt other dojutsu like byakugan. |
fictionelement777 chapter 13 . 9/25/2016 Yay! Good that you're back and I dig the latest chapter! Can't wait for the next! |
CoffeeTime987 chapter 12 . 5/20/2016 This chapter made me laugh more, I enjoyed it a lot. Find Tsunade :D |
moops chapter 12 . 5/18/2016 2 |
trynmailme chapter 12 . 5/18/2016 It was a great chapter... Plzz continue |
ShadowofDeathsveil chapter 12 . 5/18/2016 Oh my god you dirty tease with that little cliffhanger there. Now I can't wait for your next update. Oh and everything is amazing love the work. |
CoffeeTime987 chapter 11 . 4/26/2016 Maybe you can interact with the teams you affected? Like how Neji's dad is still alive since you nipped that in the bud or if his dad ended up dying in a different way, You know? If the characters you saved die anyways just in a different way than in the manga. Just a thought, also good work I'm still enjoying it! |
fictionelement777 chapter 11 . 4/3/2016 Teach naruto seals and sword techniques and chakra chains and plz make him smarter. Other than that, this story is making excellent progress in my opinion. Why it has so little reviews I don't know. But keep up the good work and try contacting and pming other members of FANFICTION to let your story be known to others. |
wahyubison chapter 11 . 4/3/2016 well with kabuto running from konoha you must think AU story well in 1 month naruto will be stronger and smarter from canon verse in chuunin exams with tutoring from haruki well you can make haruki 2nd stage proctor to kill orochimaru |