Reviews for The Lost Daughter
supboyyyyy93 chapter 5 . 6/1
The story is great, please continue im really liking this idea of Ryuko being with her mother.
Fan chapter 5 . 5/1
I loved! Loved your job...I'm brazilian...
And you worked very well with the characters ... I feel frustrated to know that there are only 5 chapters and that five years have passed ..
Dragonjek chapter 5 . 4/3
Interesting story-I'm glad to see that you're still doing writing it.

I do wonder, though-it sounds like whatever Nui meant to do, she didn't have time for what with the interrupting Nudist, but Ryuko still had a really painful experience. Why was that?

I think Satsuki's mental reaction to learning about Ryuko was rather... muted. Maybe it hadn't sunk in yet? "Hopefully she's willing to fight with me and has resolve" isn't exactly the first thing one normally thinks when they learn that their supposedly murdered sister is still alive.

Ryuko losing her resolve about her father is interesting. Although it's understandable-discovering that she's got a family, and having no assurance that Isshin was her real father...

I sort of hope Satsuki does decide to "claim" Ryuko like Nui's afraid she will (although obviously not going through with it. The way Ragyo and Nui behave as though she shares the same sick lusts as them is disturbing in a whole new way). I hardly think it'll stop Ragyo, but at least it might keep away that little psychopath. And I must admit to a truly frightening degree of adoration for Ryuko X Satsuki fics.

Speaking of Nui, I like how you characterized her. A lot of authors leave out the innocent aspect of her particular brand of cruelty in favor of viewing her as false-cutesy.

I'm guessing the Life Fibers in the clothing were calling out to those in Ryuko's own heart? Hopefully she can get something darker, maybe a jacket. She looks great in darker clothing.

I'm looking forwards to Satsuki meeting Ryuko. No one would really believe it if someone outright explained that clothing was going to eat people, so just telling Ryuko about it isn't enough. I'm guessing it will be a gradual attempt to reveal to her the greater the Kiryuins are playing?

Anyways, I'm looking forwards to where you'll take this.

Stay safe and don't get sick.
Quickened chapter 3 . 3/21
I wanna see how this plays out.
Khy Dragon chapter 1 . 3/6
Please give her Senketsu!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/3
So happy for the update! And it’s good to hear you’re not dead yet :)
KingofHeartless'09 chapter 5 . 3/1
Glad to see you're back, and if you're too busy then don't rush anything out. Take your time with your work and everyone can wait for it to come out eventually.
Azzazelle chapter 1 . 1/4/2019
Very interesting plot with good writing! I really wish this had continued...
wildwill chapter 6 . 11/17/2018
Very interesting story!
ShugoYuuki123 chapter 6 . 6/23/2018
I hope you continue this story I'm really enjoying it :)
Sakura chapter 6 . 1/2/2018
More updates
Guest chapter 6 . 12/14/2017
The story is great and interesting so far! When are you going to post the next chapter?
kino009 chapter 1 . 12/14/2017
Or have Ragyo design a Kamui for Ryuko with her own design instead of adding Senketsu (actually this I think would be a better idea for you)
kino009 chapter 6 . 12/14/2017
This story is awesome so far and I would love to see it keep going! Here’s an idea: how about instead of Aikuro finding Senketsu (like in the original), Nui instead has found Senketsu and Ragyo redesigns Senketsu into a uniform similar to Satuki’s sailor uniform (maybe like a hi-low dress looking sailor uniform). If you want some help with the story, I would love to help you!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/26/2017
Wow great! Wonder where she will take her to. The school maybe? Or will they go clothes shopping? That honestly seems like something they might do since Ryuko might not have that great of a wardrobe
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