This story started out great, but it needed to be finished. Maybe a rematch, some heartless if possible, you know. Keep writing these stories. In no time, you will be able to write one that will take the breath away from all readers.

Oops, just spotted my mistake, thanks for pointing it out to me! I fixed it and It's perfectly good now... I think... anyways, This is my first sort of Anime themed fic, and sometimes it may sound too much like other things I have written, but I want it to stand out. any suggestions? thx a lot

~*American Granger*~

it's good you should continue (I hope you continue) Your doing a good job keeping sora and kairi in character, though you do have some misstakes spelling sora's name sometimes (saro instead of sora) anyway hurry up with the next chapter please