god lord this last scene was s8 beautiful i nearly cried... LOVE this story...

Fabulous story, loved it

Lovely story !

This is cute!

Gosh, I just love this story so much! Everything about it is perfect!

This was absolutely wonderful! Sweet, interesting and well paced! I devoured it!

Just binge-read this fic and it's pure perfection. I love it!

Read this in one quick sitting last night and enjoyed it so thoroughly that I had to come back and review. This was so sweet and perfect! You did an amazing job fitting character motivations, relationships, squabbles and interests from the show into this totally AU world. Thank you for sharing this lovely little tale!

Excellent

Lovely

Thank you for this extra chapter and happy birthday to peggyyswan. They are so happy! Liam and Elsa and baby Eric. Victoria with her dark hair and bright blue eyes is a Daddy's girl. Killian is still working at the library and studying pirates. Lovely, brilliant, great writing, tremendous background in history and English royalty. Thoroughly enjoyable. Thanks for writing.

A wonderful happy conclusion and a glimpse into their future. Liam is with Elsa! I am delighted. And the evil media crocodile and witch are defeated. This was lovely, sweet and rich with detail, some angst, completed by joy at the end.

Oh dear god I am in tears over Liam. "So bone tired of living". Such a good man with a brother who loves him so deeply. And yet the demands of life can still be too much. Very well written, seriously and with respect.

The use of dream shade was creative. Tragic and scary and very creative. Ultimately Liam's strength of will overcame his determination to die. If Elsa can be his friend he will have a new person in his life loving him and choosing him. I don't know how he can be invisible to the masses and the media, he would be a story to write about. Looking forward to the rest.

Their first time together was written beautifully, with love and care. Thank you for that, it was perfect for the story.

I am grateful Liam will live. He has had a difficult time. You cannot imagine or underestimate PTSD, it is all in the individual experience. I hope he gets good care. I hope he can relax over his brother's circumstance, seeing that Killian is safe, comfortable, happy and incredibly in love.

No! What has happened? What kind of an accident?

Liam anticipated the media intrusion. He was concerned that Killian would be able to handle it. I wonder if sweet shy Killian is ready for the tremendous change to his life. Is Liam unhappy about the relationship itself or just concerned for Killian? Now that I think about it, his focus is Killian, his security and his happiness. Maybe he worries that Emma will break his heart, perhaps be forced to leave him.

I love Killian at the top of the stairs, "Sorry about the mess, I'm usually a bit neater". So cute. So clever.