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The soggy sword so stupid but still so funny

kurotsuchi has red pupil why is every idiot writing she has pink

Great job shame you stopped

this story seems very different from the rewrite, why not continue both?

I like that you killed off Haku and Zabuza, but it feels rushed.

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S iI'm confused, how many years earlier has Naruto graduated and how long has kurenai been a genin?

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you should keep kurenai most peolpe read it because of it and the five elements is good having him learn them would be great also having Naruto graduate early isn't bad.

You should keep Kurenai pairing, most of us read it because of it.

Five elements also is good thing, it's not like he can use them without trouble, he had to learn how tu use them, right?

Just so you know Masashi Kishimoto the recent Sasuke with such an important character for him was because it was based on his original conception call Shonen Jump's Avenger that was the story and he would your story Sasuke was going to be Avenger to bring his brother a Itachi back to stand trial for the murder of his clan in Naruto was a side character like a sidekick comic believe someone who always bumbles his way around but for some reason they took a liking to the character of Naruto when he actually at least his first Story Probably privately to his friends and that's when you say the change in the story of Naruto if you watched the first 3 episodes of Naruto you notice he has some of the story for intended to be part of Shonen Jump's Avenger and Sakura was going to be his love interest that's why but he kept some of the main formula of the original story intact but when Naruto character people took a liking to he said the change it around but Sasuke was always going to be his lead character not another joke that's right now that was so under the power and in an interview he said the only reason he created the fourth Hokage is Naruto's father is because he became a father himself and the story now it was never supposed to have the fourth Hokage is his father he was supposed to have random orphan that's how you know that he has wrote the store he made up things that he went along

Just for the record I started this knowing you abandoned or restarted this fic. however you want to look at it.

I absolutely loved this fic and hope from the deepest part of my corrupted soul that one you finish the new version and two it is atleast half as good.

I know you're rewriting this, but I just want to stress that it's a lot easier to immerse myself in a story when the author gets canonical facts correct. Sakumo killed himself when Kakashi was really young, quite a while before Sarutobi decided it was time to step down and choose a successor.

that was great