Great story shame it was stopped

Salazar's pimping cage

Hadrian. Ugh.

Update when you can

So same character different stories,
If so, Ruby is Demi

two things, first I love Salazar in this. Second, it's sad that even the author doesn't know where the Stoll brothers got the duffel bag from.

I love salazar

Your Harry is annoying and not likable, and his announce leveled up to 1000 with your even more annoying ghost in his head. You know nothing about fighting or romance and your sad attempt at relationships comes off with no real substantial character development. All of your people come off mouthy and over opinionated. Your pervert action of all male characters shows a lot about you as a writer and a person as well as their sad cuckold handling by all female characters. I tried but no one is growing out of their -15 year old mental state. Good luck you need it.

This is one of the most amazing and original crossovers I have read. Love Salazar’s personality.

Hola espero ver más de esta historia es GENIAL

Hola yo espero seguir leyendo esta historia es GENIAL

This rewrite of yours must include Harry being the son of ONLY James and Athena. NOT James, Athena, AND Lily. Because Harry is not blood related to Petunia Dumbledore is forced by the Bond of Blood Charm not establishing to make other arrangements for Harry's childhood away from Wizarding Britain. Say by making sure a certain godfather gets a fair trial straight away.

thank you. this was still pretty good, but i just love when authers look at at their work and say "I can do better." fleshing out selena would also be awesome.

This is very good

Kaito is hungry, wants to eat

mmm
I did like the story, and I would have liked you to finish it like this ... but hey, if you don't feel comfortable with what you write, it's normal for you to rewrite it, I hope to know soon what it ends