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Update update update update this unique story

This seems interesting...

Do you plab to update this or not? The story has alot of potential so pleade please update soon. Also, if you have any suggestions to similar stories, please tell me. I wish you good luck and hope for an update soon!

well, what is lulu going to do now? is he going to track down c.c? is c.c. in the capsule again? interesting premise for story. looking forward to reading what you come up with next.

Sounds intresting. .. C.C and Jeremiah (Syoko?) Didnt betray Lelouch?

I'm liking the story continues'll be looking fanfic

Wow, this is a beginning to a really good story, I think. I like the idea of a more villanious Lelouch! :) Hope to see an update very soon.

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Oh man, I do so love villainous stories, there are nearly none around since everyone wants to read the white knight saves the world stories. Sure, those are entertaining to a degree, but I prefer darker stories like this one promises to be much better. I hope to see more of your promising story and I am really enjoying the story so far (even if there's only one chapter at the moment, it's well written and entertaining). Keep up the good work and I'll see you next chapter.

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This is interesting, although I'm not a fan of long-haired Lelouch (just a personal preference). Maybe a hair-cut in the next chapter?

I am curious as to what else Lelouch has improved in, other than his physical qualities. Is he a better Knightmare pilot now?

Wow, I cannot even begin to say how much I like this. I do love it when my fellow writers make Lelouch ruthless. It's a nice touch that this Lelouch doesn't care about Nunnally anymore. I have to ask though, what about C.C.? Is she in this timeline?

Your style is refreshing with all these GaryStu!Lelouch and Mellow!Lelouch fics, and has peaked my interest. It is hard to come by interesting stories in this fandom.

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- The Demon Prosecutor