| Reviews for A Man's World |
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   southerencuttie23 chapter 65 . 7/11 I hope you finish this one day. I'd love to read the ending. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/25 Eva marie saint. Not eva saint marie lol |
| Guest chapter 65 . 1/3 I hope you enjoyed the holidays and NYE! Wishing you all the best in this new decade! |
| Guest chapter 65 . 12/20/2019 this is a great story, please finish it |
| Elisabeth123 chapter 65 . 11/15/2019 This has been brilliantly written _ thank you! But please please finish it very soon! Please! |
| Guest chapter 25 . 8/16/2019 "This place reminds the ruins" Does that sound like a complete sentence to you? If you gave this to someone to "fix" then it must have been a real shit show because they missed ALOT of mistakes. |
| Guest chapter 24 . 8/16/2019 Too bad the horrible grammar is ruining this story. How did you not notice it? I mean really? There are at least four mistakes in each chapter! Very obvious mistakes! |
| Guest chapter 21 . 8/16/2019 And the grammar issues continue... |
| Guest chapter 20 . 8/16/2019 "I am not saint" Edward says. Is he also not American? Because he sounds foreign when he speaks like that. |
| Guest chapter 19 . 8/16/2019 Chapter 19 open with Edward saying this gem,"God, I'm acting like I dont you" There are several grammar issues in every chapter, it makes this hard to read. And honestly? I'm embarrassed for you. |
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/16/2019 "I need to be teach my child. . ." There are so many mistakes in this story. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/16/2019 more grammar issues here |
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/16/2019 The grammar issues continue. There are so many mistakes! Like Bella saying she will have to "past". Clearly, that should be "pass". |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/16/2019 Even more grammar mistakes in this chapter. Seriously, whoever looked this over for you is an idiot. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/16/2019 The grammar is pretty bad, mistakes everywhere. It reads like all you did was use spell check. |
