Really beautifull, and I believe in the paralel universe.. ;)

Now I cry... Beautiful!

Nice story! Is there a sequel in the woods?

So sad and so sweet...

obviously English is not your first language... the syntax and grammar are awful but with work you could make it work :)

I liked this story. Thanks

Yes Timothy, Charlotte, & Sophia...your moms are at peace now... *'forever-in-a-day'*

I love the concept of your story. I would have liked to see more of the alternate life with Jane and Maura but I will have to use my imagination. Thanks for sharing your story!

well i have enjoyed it tyvm

Good story:-):-) look forward to the next update.

Well Jane...say something, tell her! *oh, oh*

uh jane you had better have a good sleep ur gonna need energy to face m&m

oh my theres a lot going on here

Well Jane confesses to Maura that she's in love with her, keeping her promise to Charlotte. Now let's see or rather read what happens next...
*quite interesting*

Is this...done?! *good read!*