Awesome! Quite gory I gotta say: I like it!
Great writing, thanks!

Saw, Monster and Exquisite Corpse (especially the later two) is what I was thinking as soon as I read through half of this masterpiece. My god...the only thing I feel bad about is that I didn't read this amazing oneshot sooner.

I will start by telling you I was reading this on the edge of my seat with an open mouth throughout. You really need to have more confidence in your writing love, sincerely so... I have no words to describe just now outstandingly good you are at it!

The description is as always top-notch. The flow of the tale is amazing, each word is thought through and impressive and the flow of the dialogue was extremely beautiful... Everything about your writing is so freakin' good!

Onto the gore... I don't know why you insist this is a fail, this is the best gore/murder story I ever read. After so many failed reads, I settled to never read gory works from other authors ever again. Yours tho...oh god, please do more... It's so addicting. Why it's so addicting? Because it flows into the story naturally. There is no exaggeration or overuse of the element like I tend to do it, it's exactly the right amount to get the point across that works beautifully given the current story. Please do more gore in the future, I need it from you! I finally found you, the person who can provide me with what I want to see in gore... An amazing plot and just the right amount of the element that doesn't fail humorously. Gosh, thank you for this love!

Before I venture into ZoLaw land, allow me to tell you one thing...XD I have never read anything Frobin before. I did ejoy the pair, but I never cared enough for it to check it out. It was a sweet read...and a bittersweet parallel to the tragedy that was ZoLaw in this fic...it almost felt like...this is what it was before Zoro's accident, this is what it would have continued to be if Zoro didn't have a trauma... sigh...

ZoLaw...I can't even begin to tell you how much more I fell in love with this couple now that I read your masterpiece... Your view and take on them...oh god, it's so...beautiful and natural. It's a couple meant to be!
Law was an excellent portrayal, and allow me to address Zoro specifically... I asked you for a detail about the car crash...but you know, I feel like it's good it wasn't explained in detail and deliberately not stated word by word as to what happened to him exactly, allowing for a reader's interpretation and oh boy do I haz it. I liked ho Zoro retained his depressed state from the time Law was forced to leave for work and until the moment he died. That's the detail Ii was looking for, to allow me to better understand what was running through his head. And I also like the fact you didn't get deep into his head, allowing a reader to absorb the morbid reality that is cold-blooded murder on a whim and with no actual reason behind it... You are not allowing us to sympathize with a killer and that's the right way to go about it... But I can't help but sympathize with my baby still...plus, I know you, I know your writing, I know there is more to it than meets the eye! You are just extremely good at leaving hints here and there and moving onto the next scene.
Law couldn't kill him, so he hid him away from society... In isolation, what would Zoro think about? Abandonment. Just like Law blamed himself, Zoro would spend days contemplating what he was doing, why he was doing it, what was wrong with him... But...he wouldn't be able to stop. Because the roulette was put into motion with and he was already in too deep. So, no matter how well he comprehended the entire situation, his mind wouldn't click with it... And he would repeat the same deed over and over.
He missed Law...he didn't want to be abandoned...not again...and that spawns from his pre-trauma time too, when he felt he was left. Yes, he understood it was because of work and he wouldn't be able to do anything about it, still... No one can help what they feel...and what Zoro felt was loneliness...and a wish to have Law to himself more often.

I love your usage of medical knowledge, as always that's a beautiful pleasure to see! Also, the timestamp was amazing and totally accurate. Also, your description of what was left of the abandoned notch indeed felt like these were thoughts coming from a person who lived there... god how beautiful it was, every single detail...
(also liked the parts about your murican lifestyle, about paying off uni loan and all XD Nice!)

Overall, it was an outstanding read to me. And Ii can't thank you enough for mentioning this masterpiece...a true MASTERPIECE OF A WORK OF ART to me! smooooch Thank you, thank you so much my love for writing this amazing story! Can't wait to finally read far more from you. I immensely enjoy your fics. Everything I see is def up my alley! Thank youuuu!

Oh God...
This was so amazing yet so freaking tragic...

Wow. Just Wow. I didn't expect this to be so amazing! I dont ship zoro and law but damn i couldn't help but to feel so amaze hoe detailed your story telling is. This is so cool. Im fan of silent of the lambs and dang, you captured tjis perfectly. I love it do much! The ending was sad but expected to happen but just wow. You did it! It really made me read the details word by word and / cough
Great one shot. I love it so much!

I'm not a fan of horror, and tbh I'm really wondering why I read this. This is very dark and very sad (and the cannibalism is pretty disturbing). It's very scary and horror'ish. The scene at the top is scary and disturbing. The ending is too. :/ I mean Law escaped from Death row with a pen. and Zoro just killed more people... Not exactly comforting. XD I'm glad they're dead. I didn't think I would ever say that about some of my fave characters.