Ash why did you train Muk to be a hugger

White’s parents will be frilled.

White sees harry as her son.

White is NOT to be angered.

hola saludos , continua la historia porfis , me gusto mucho

I hope you continue this, as it is very sweet and I like the choices you've made thus far.

A little TOO much cuddling, but that's just me. XD
Still, you have made Harry's position more real than Rowling did. You brought on the fact that no abused individual just acts like a normal person immediately. There are "tells" that show, and even if some aren't as obvious as others, they're still there.

Fantastic job! Can't wait to read more!

Nice, and I think him meeting Ash would be a fun twist.

Was reading this then noticed there was a Harry Potter quiz ad at the bottom

No parseltongue? Surprising, considering the whole 'grass snake' setup. Oh well.

Yes! This got updated! I'm so glad this is continuing, I love it so far and felt it might not get an update. Glad I was proven wrong. Keep going!

gotta love the fluff!

I like it it would be cool if Harry was a prodigy in training or coordination on par with anabel by the time he goes to Hogwarts just a thought and would you consider one where Harry is raised by nerse joy or officer Jenny

The vanity of the Snivy line was portrayed well.

I hope Vernon will come into the picture soon. You've been building up to a confrontation with White, two Pokemon, and Vernon himself.

However, it would be even more fun if, before that happened, Harry made himself some additional Pokemon family & friends. For instance, he could make companions with a Gardevoir [for their parental qualities], a Legendary [such as Arceus or Jirachi], or something else.

Don't forget that wild Pokemon are themselves smart (perhaps even human-level intelligence in some species) and that they exist pretty much everywhere.

Perhaps, you could introduce a team of alleged people criminals that could act all 'Even Evil Has Standards' when they hear of how Vernon and the rest of the Durselys acted. Another thing, I hope you bring back Petunia and Dudley too. I very much enjoyed the whole family getting their just rewards within each of your stories.

There are other people in the Pokemon world who would certainly be happy to lock up someone as nasty as Vernon, or make him suffer themselves. For example, Nurse Joy, Policewoman Jenny, etc. Something to think about, maybe?

I really can't wait to see how you portray the rightful vengeance on Vernon with a horde of Pokemon and/or people. No matter how you choose to continue with the plot, I very much thank you for providing everyone this great series of stories, Gamer95!