Super exciting! A rare kind of read for lawlu. Can't wait to see where this goes, and the mystery behind law's engagement...

I am so invested in this story. Mystery thriller is so my game, and when coupled with Law Luffy, gah. Brilliant.

Oh man, I really like the story so far, it's captivating! _ will you plan to continue this? I hope so, this story is so good and it's a rare genre in One Piece fanfics.

Ah this story is amazing! All the mystery and the game and little clues and even my favorite pairing! I love it! I have so many questions and i keep wondering what will happen next! You did a really great job on it c: i cant wait to see what happens with the phone call to buggy! i really hope you update soon the suspense is killing me xD

Thank you for this awesome update! So getting further into the game and it's getting more and more dangerous... it gives one this uneasy feeling - like worrying for the characters... somehow an unpleasant vibe is looming SO definitely looking forward to what'll happen next and what those two will do.

Ooh things are getting more and more interesting with each chapter _ I love this Law-Luffy tag team in collecting all the clues together, kudos to Law for sticking up with Luffy even though his card was stolen by another peep.

Law's ring though...he said he's engaged with another person in previous chapters, yes? From the inscription on the ring, could this person be Rosinante? Aish.

Overall good job on the writing! Looking forward to the next chapter!

O.O an update! *does a little happy dance* Enjoyed reading this chapter! Like really did - it's fun and the boat ride! That clown though... I guess we'll see what happens on the next chapter. Can't wait!

Aaahhhh finally an update \(*o*)/ this made my day, thank you! Wonderful chapter as always.

An update! So happy to read this, the suspense at the end of the chapter is killing me, I'm so curious on how it will turn out next *_*

I can't help but think though, it seems that Law and Luffy's clues were designed for them to have to work together in order to solve the riddles. Why's that? Did Roger predict that those two will be a pairing while writing the clues and will? He shipped them even though they haven't met yet? Or there will be something sinister by the end of the game. Aaaa I wanna know, this is a good story I hope you will finish this until the end.

A mazing! I'm so curious of what'll happen next! Keep it up! /

Nice story and written well. I am curious about this game and what will happen next. Keep up the good work!

Oh, Paulie X'D

Anyway, gripping chapter as always! It's cute how Law and Luffy's clues are related though (and I wonder why). Law's engaged? 0.0 (Does that have some thing to do with Mingo?) And dazm, that ending! It's a cliffff - ugh, now am definitely definitely looking forward to what will happen next!

Oh this is good! I just wish for more back stories but I guess it'll come out in the future ne?

Pink ring? So theyre forming a temporary alliance now with Ace's free treatment on the line. I wonder what'll happen next.

I am absolutely captivated with this story. The premise is so good! I keep on thinking that the rich guy in Luffy's clue is Law and the golden heart meant Law's heart, or dare I say, Law's affection (aawwwww). Of course I might be wrong, it's your story so do what you like with it (although romantic LawLu will make this helpless shipper feel so happy).

Watching duo Law-Luffy hunting for the treasure will be very interesting. I'll wait patiently for the next chapter to come out :D keep up the good work!