hola me encanta tus historia de ben x reader hace las mas seguido

Hickeys are nasty...just saying.. plus they make you look trashy..

Good luck with your break from writing I really liked the epilogue any chance you can make it a one shot between your two stories and say like warning lemons I hope you can

Maybe you could make a new story and have it include the epilogue, kind of like a deleted scenes story because I would like to have known what happened in it.
You could also include other ideas of yours that you later decided shouldn't be in the story, but you still want us to know about them

I hope everything works out for you 3

And it gets worse...just stop.
You basically Plagiarized the entire movie...
This is just... I’m sorry. So bad.

Okay, so I like the idea of someone being Hades daughter. What I don't like is that you basically took line for line Mal's words from the movie and made Hadrey say them. That's called plagiarism and it also takes away from your OC. Don't take my words as a flame but, this lacks character. Also, I skimmed through future chapters and in Chapter 17, if memory serves. You wrote intercourse between Ben and Hadrey. This is s rated T story. That is a MA setting and FanFiction has rules against that kind of writing to begin with. So, you need to change the rating of this story. Also, give Hadrey more originality. The enjoyment of this story just goes out the window when all the lines coming from Hadrey mouth was said by Mal in the film. Give Hadrey more originality and don't literally make this whole thing a bucket of plagiarism and this wouldn't be half bad.

*Then, Hadrey ran into the lockers* X'D

That was totes amazeballs

I'm currently stalking your book waiting for the next update for descendants 2! Lol

Hades huh? This will be interesting...

Welcome back! Trailer was good and I'm so glad you are continuing the story!

I wasn't sure about reading this, considering Mal was supposed to end up with Ben but I gave it a shot and I really hate to say it but I'm not a fan of how this is written. I hope you don't take this as a flame but as constructive criticism. I love the idea of her being Hades kid, that's because it is original and your idea. What I don't like is how pretty much every line that was supposed to be Mal' s is said by Hadrey. It's straight up plagiarism and that takes away from the enjoyment of reading your story for me. If this story had been written with Hadrey having her own, original lines it would have been so much more enjoyable because it would have established her own personality instead of coming off as a total copy of Mal, thereby ruining the reason why you would want to give Ben a new love interest. Once again, I hope you don't take this the wrong way and I wish you well in all of your future writing 14

Hey I absolutely love your stories. I'm actually following most of them. But I came to warn you. I think someone has been plagiarizing this story. It's practically work for word. Just thought I'd let you know.

why would Jane say they mated instead of saying they just had sex