je n'aime pas du tout la façon de kanda de traiter Allen sans rien savoir de la situation !

Plz update ;u;

MY *GULAY. 君の fanfic はすばらしです！私は "Allen Historia" がすきです！Can't wait to finish reading it.

* filipino term for veggie

Please continue this! It’s extremely well written and it’s the only “young Allen” story I’ve read that makes a lick of sense! Original idea, heartbreaking, but original and well written none the less.

Client? Oh shoot. Was Herman one of Allen's clients? He couldn't have been his master since he didn't react violently to his name. I hope you're still continuing this; it's really good! I love fanfics about Allen's past and personality and stuff like that.

Oh Allen... My heart clenches for him and all the pain and experiences he went(and goes) through.

OK this is going places
Dark places
Interesting ones, for sure, but very dark

You've done a great job of conveying how Kanda seems so callous, but how if you've got a grasp of his character you understand that "" is Kanda speak for he's glad Allen is still somewhat like how they all know himuch
You don't make it explicit so it seems like a reward for knowing the characters well when you read none thing and understand another :)

Shit
I funking knew it
I didn't want it to be true, but goddamn

Oh this is Effing intense

Can't wait for your next chapter. This is really getting exciting.

Update soon bro

It was a really great chapter, It made me really sad for Allen to go through all that though but I really cant wait for the next update! Tim and Allen playing together was so cute!

Yay you're back! Aww Tim and Allen are to cute playing together even with them talking about boobs.

hmmm, this was an interesting chapter though it made me sad the thought of allen having to go through that... Thanks for writing.