| Reviews for Numbers from Poland |
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Guest chapter 32 . 11/11/2018 What the fucking hell. That story... Oh my god I seriously don't know what I say. I love it, hate it, and am somehow crying all at the same time. It the beginning I seriously thought this was just another WWIII story, but it was so in depth with so many details and character developments. I love how it all wrapped up and how made it so realistic. I literally was so upset when my fav characters died. (Why Prussia?! And why right at the very end too!) But even the deaths were so well written. This was truly an amazing story. I am still in. There is more I want to say but I honestly don't know how to say it. Amazing job |
Dorito chapter 32 . 4/25/2018 Although i really wanted toris to suffer a painfull death... This story was flippin amazing! It couldve made a great movie, even if it was 5 hours- i would watch it. I have read butt-tons of storys and fanfictions, but there were only two that i could consider my favorites. And this one is definetly 1 of them :) |
Sososa chapter 32 . 8/7/2017 this was so awesome! It was so sad though,none of my babies deserved to suffer |
Polly Little chapter 2 . 7/20/2017 That was clever, very good diplomacy. They both seem so calm and happy, it's surreal. |
LadyoftheChicken chapter 32 . 7/18/2017 I really appreciate that in your story you didn't make Toris and Feliks the clear vengeful antagonists and that you showed that no one person is truly good or evil. You didn't abuse the power of being able to kill off characters. Each characters death had a strong impact to the story which made them feel...human in a way-ish. By the time the whole story came to a close it wasn't all rainbows and sunshine. The setting for this story is war and it speaks honestly that the cost of war always outways the somehow benefits of it. Uhhhhh you made me cry how could you. |
Polly Little chapter 3 . 7/11/2017 The explanation of who's where is useful. The mention of Austria and Hungary physically hurt, and it was easy to feel Germany's exhaustion. |
Polly Little chapter 1 . 7/10/2017 Hi, I'm rereading so I can sort out the TV Tropes page, and I had to just comment on how good this beginning is. It's nicely ominous, especially a second time around where comments about who should be part of the family makes me want to cry. Belarus's last note is amazing, and I thought you should know that I'm still suddenly crying over this fic almost a year after finishing it. |
HetaRosFangirl chapter 32 . 6/10/2017 Hello! I know I'm a bit late here, but this is the first work i've read of yours - and it was amazing! Character arcs amazing, breathtaking writing, difinitely did your research, this is easily my favorite WW3 fanfiction out there. Of course, you did kill off my favorite character Prussia, as well as my Estonian heredity, but still - they had honorable deaths (I'm making excises for my broken heart.) Anyway, now i'm going to check out your other f]works, see you later! Happy writing~ |
Chizu5645 chapter 32 . 9/20/2016 AHHH I FINISHED IT Okay, prepare yourself for a LONG review. This book has a ton of great points to it, plot-wise and character-wise. Let's list them: - Amazing WWIII speculation. From start to finish, it stayed realistic as if this could actually happen. You even added some important humans as well, not making the War a personification-centric one. Keyword being important. - YOU FREAKING KILLED CHARACTERS. I've seen some "oh, countries are gonna die" books, but never have I read a book that killed a whopping total SIX countries! And in Hetalia's original universe too, not a human universe! That is simply amazing. (Also quick note: Prussia wasn't the first to die. Any story where he dies but not as the first death, I repeatedly applaud the story and author.) - Romance. Beside the obvious PruHun, AusHun, and Italy x Holy Rome, the relationships that the fandom dubbed as romantic had their appearances (such as the friendly RoChu and GerIta) without shoving it in our faces. Very few have been able to do as such, and I just love that. - Germany. You've turned a normally bland character in fanfics into a complex, dynamic character. He felt very real, very alive. I could feel his torment about his mysterious past and about those trying years at the prison camp, and I love that you did not fail to guilt him with WWII stuff. - Lithuania. Best. Villain. Ever. His transformation from a meek follower to a cold-hearted, justified villain was well-paced and very interesting to see. I find it especially nice that all along the way, he felt he was a hero, just like many of the other conquerors of ages past. And his slow, agonizing down spiral into madness? Brilliantly done! - The humans. Adding Volkov, Sevastian, Moshe, etc. was a smart move. Instead of being a two-dimensional personification-centric World War Three, it was a World War where both human and personification were affected, just like the other two (or, at least, speculated to be). ... Those are the main points that I absolutely love about this book. Now I really need to catch up in Air Sirens! Can't wait for more awesomeness from you! See ya~! |
Polly Little chapter 32 . 8/21/2016 That was beautiful, and I may be about to cry. |
Polly Little chapter 31 . 8/21/2016 Oh. |
Polly Little chapter 27 . 8/20/2016 Well, your empire's doomed. Have fun! You seriously started a blog devoted to your mum? I'm intrigued. |
Polly Little chapter 26 . 8/20/2016 Chapter twenty six: In which there is much angst, the reader becomes convinced that Ludwig is going to die, and Eduard actually does die (sob). |
Polly Little chapter 23 . 8/20/2016 Lithuania in Africa? Don't worry. I got Latvia, Lithuania, Ladonia, and Latvaria mixed up, despite one of them actually being a country in Marvel. Doctor Doom's in charge there, so as you can imagine, it's not a very happy place. |
Polly Little chapter 22 . 8/20/2016 So it wasn't a trick. Woo, denial! Polly's been fooling herself! Fair enough though - I read a story recently where Ravis was stabbed, and he gave his last words and everything, but was completely fine. Vive la France on France's gravestone: clearly he doesn't. |