This was awesome, a pity it is only a one-shot though.

this is soo damn cute

Damn ... that was fucking awesome, the best moment of my evening until now.

That was also very very very hilarious all those death threat ... I can even make a pyramid of power with at the very bottom Sun for then Adam after Yang follow by Weiss alongside with Blake and at the very top our little speedstar Ruby with her evil plan to murder her sister and make accuse her best friend ( such devilness among devil ).
You can even add humour at list of genre.

It's stories like this that can bring me those big smile and laughing moment even if the plot was not the best, which mean for that you're an really good author who must be in my favorite list ... and it's done ( now I must make some time to read more of your other stories ).

OK I loved this it was freaking Adorable and like how Yang is overprotective of Ruby my favorite part was when sun started to cry behind the counter that was hilarious I had trouble reading after that because I was laughing to much and I love and I love Yang and Weiss together it's not my favorite pairing but it's entertaining now team Ladybug is my favorite :)

P.d do you take Fanfic request?

Interesting, it is very open if you decide to come back to it later and just far enough in you won't have people chasing you down to finish it.

I enjoyed this enough that I would like to see a continuation it was very sweet.

Keep up the great work.

Thank you for this story. I loved the very cute last part especially. I know you wrote this without an editor but only problem I spotted was the dialogue could at times be a bit confusing.

Okay, I forgive you for Treasures now... Kinda...

it was a great story i loved it.i only saw a few words that had missing letters or some funny grammar but even tho there were mistakes i loved your story

Nice story, i enjoy it...

Loved the chapter. I did notice a handful of mistakes but as you said you didn't have an editor. Otherwise the story is looking good so far. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Not as serious as the description made me believe. The grammar errors and rushed dialogue made it hard to understand what they were saying sometimes. Also, the characters seemed a bit mean spirited with all the insults and death threats. Seriously, Sun got burned hard in this. The part where he suddenly broke out into tears felt especially extreme. Still, I enjoyed reading this and I always like a good blackrose story, it just felt a bit off.

this is simply amazing with such a simple prompt you crafted a great story 10/10 IGN