Reviews for Breaking the Chains
DragonLadyA chapter 41 . 6/1/2018
This is one of the best merel/oc I have read! The development of merel as he fell in love was very well spaced an I am totally happy with the ending. Awesomeness!
littleshelly chapter 41 . 5/10/2018
Excellent story! Maddy is another awesome OC and perfect for Merle. And the Dixon brothers trying to change a diaper has to be one of the most hilarious things ever written.
littleshelly chapter 40 . 5/10/2018
I swear Daddy Merle messing with the mother of his Love child is hilarious. You write him so well.
littleshelly chapter 9 . 5/6/2018
WOO HOOOOOO! Sophia’s there now! I love her and Merle together!
littleshelly chapter 7 . 5/6/2018
Yaaaaaay! Caryl on the road together!
littleshelly chapter 5 . 5/6/2018
I’ve always hated the Governor and I look forward to the time when Brother Merle gets the best of him.
littleshelly chapter 3 . 5/6/2018
I’m glad you didn’t make her a badass, and I look forward to seeing what happens with Mediocre Madison and Brother Merle, lol. I can relate. And I got a feeling the Caryl will be interesting, too.
littleshelly chapter 1 . 5/6/2018
Okay...

Where did this all come from and why haven’t I seen it before? And I feel like a piss-poor Haitus and Brother Merle fan for not reading it until now, so I apologize, but I’m definitely intrigued! It’s like a present on Christmas that was behind the tree and no one saw it till they were taking the tree down! Thank you!
musicgal100189 chapter 41 . 12/10/2017
I ending almost as much as the beginning because its just enough of a cliff hanger.

If anyone could have taken on Nego, Merle could have.

This is my favorite of your stories by the way
sweetkiwi604 chapter 41 . 10/15/2017
I want you to know I owe you SO much for writing this wonderful story for little old me and then me being such a horrible friend and not finishing it until now. I feel like a shithead I am SO sorry! This was an amazing story and I'm fangirling over Merle all over again. This was perfect. And I cant believe they named him John Wayne hahaha
sweetkiwi604 chapter 40 . 10/15/2017
Talk about the feels in this chaperon. Ugh. You got me and you got me good and you know why. I love this. I also love that he was sweet in his Merle way but wasn't a pussy either. "Big girls need love too." I about died lol
sweetkiwi604 chapter 39 . 10/15/2017
Is it so horrible of me that I'm happy they killed Allen? Because I am. So much. Also, Daryls little jab about their dad was unexpected but I think needed. Now the question is...is the box in his pocket drugs or a pregnancy test for Maddy
sweetkiwi604 chapter 38 . 10/15/2017
I'm a little jealous at your flawless time jump and I apologize for the shitty comments but I just have to know what's going to happen next with Allen
sweetkiwi604 chapter 37 . 10/15/2017
Besides the fact I cant stand Lori either... I really enjoyed this chapter and I think moreso because you not only showed us what was going on with Rick and Merle but Lori and Maddy as well. Should be interesting with neither of them leaving
sweetkiwi604 chapter 36 . 10/15/2017
You know I was wondering who was going to be at the gate and now I'm curious who its going to be that ends up putting her down since shes bit
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