| Reviews for Fate Raining Blades |
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Kdburke2 chapter 9 . 6/20 Are you going to continue this book? I really, really liked it. |
hellsingsage chapter 9 . 3/13 need more love the concept especially considering it's implied the reason why shirou can't handle Mana very well is because he went so long this life with his circuits dormant then in the course of three days force them open and well overwork them so his circuit should be in slightly better condition since he was trained to use them at an earlier age not to mention giving him time alter oh boy imagine, comboing double Excel with unlimited blade works |
Anonymous chapter 2 . 11/18/2019 Isn't it "Time Alter: Double Accel" not excell? and if it is excell shouldn't it be excel not excell? |
Mr.Vegerott23 chapter 9 . 11/4/2019 Hope you come back to this story someday. |
typersnyder chapter 9 . 10/2/2019 Nooooo! SABBBBBBEEEEEERRRRRRRR! |
imaginationlover101 chapter 9 . 8/19/2019 Please complete this it’s really good. |
IiioiioUii chapter 4 . 2/13/2019 Iñiññuul Llul Ñuñ llllñññ Iñ |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/10/2019 Fucking retarded |
05709 chapter 1 . 6/30/2018 I'll keep waiting until next chapter, I like this plot. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 5 . 6/7/2018 "You used to be an Archer?" She asked, Shirou looked up, a bit surprised she had inquired about his old hobby. "Well, technically I still am" Teehee, time travel jokes. |
05709 chapter 9 . 5/29/2018 Well done |
05709 chapter 2 . 4/22/2018 Can't help myself, reading this over again. Well done ArgoGladuis |
Ranmaleopard chapter 9 . 4/11/2018 This is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. I eagerly await your next enjoyable chapter. Please continue |
Anon chapter 6 . 3/3/2018 You might want to consider reading through your chapters again. You have a section break one sentence too early here. Most of the negatives in this fic are really just minor things like this that can be easily fixed by properly proofreading or getting a beta editor. Would be a shame if things like that cause you to abandon this premise. |
Twos chapter 2 . 2/25/2018 Reading through this again I can already see the minor things people seem to be annoyed by (excel/accel for example) but it‘s well written, coherent, interesting and has an author with skill behind it. Every ‚issue‘ (at least in the first chapter) seems to be an oversight that can probably be attributed to lacking beta-reading, although I don’t even see any obvious grammatical errors. This is one of those stories that I actually think is not appreciated enough and I really hope it isn‘t being abandoned completely. In a perfect world and with some minor tweaks this is a story I could easily see amongst the top five in this fandom! |