| Reviews for The Raven |
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Guest chapter 4 . 10/26/2017 Why did you stop ? :((((( |
Kas3y chapter 4 . 3/1/2017 LOVED this story, it's gonna end up being one I read quite a few times :P Keep up the fantastic work :D |
FanfictionShadow chapter 4 . 1/1/2017 OH MY GOD my heart was beating SO fast when I was reading this. Poor Reid! Please continue, I need to know what happens to him! And this is such a fresh look on this relationship, so it's really interesting. I'd think that Reid would be more affected by Hotch's words, though, but I guess the news that he may never walk unassisted again takes precedence. Either way, can you please post a scene where Reid thinks about Hotch's words, maybe with the rest of the team or just Rossi or someone, and has to come to terms with his own feelings of guilt? And also show his struggles in dealing with yet another betrayal, after Gideon and his childhood? In conclusion, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! And thank you for a very entertaining, well written, and harrowing story that kept me caught up in it all. |
The Ghostly Horse chapter 4 . 9/7/2016 Holy Gods. Really did not expect to enjoy this story. It was brutal, but extremely well-written in it's brutality. You really grasped the characters and bent them to your will. All of them were incredibly believable in their reactions. Thanks. |
Tyalieva chapter 4 . 8/3/2016 Wow! Though I hate that the friendship between Hotch and Reid is broken, that was awesome! I had read the first chapter, but am really happy that you finally finished it! Hope to read more of you soon ! |
Fanfictions' Addict chapter 4 . 7/31/2016 Thank you very much for writing a sequel ! It was so good and I loved the ending ! |
bigtimedreamer101 chapter 4 . 7/29/2016 Great ending! The story overall had a great plot and the concept was new to me. The diction was like sweet music and the story kept me on the edge of my seat. |
Frakking Toasters chapter 4 . 7/27/2016 This has been amazing start to end. I love how Spencer faced Aaron (even I can't call him Hotch anymore) and laid it all out for him. Spencer is always so underestimated, so I like how you gave him this quiet yet unquestionable strength to face and resolve this problem himself and in his own way. Absolutely fantastic. xo |
DarkJediQueen chapter 4 . 7/26/2016 I think this was the best of a lot of horrible outcomes that could have happened. And this was a good ending. I loved this story from start to finish and it will go on my reread list. |
tannerose5 chapter 4 . 7/26/2016 I am amazed how well you've captured Reid's true being. I have always known Spencer had the temperament of a lion. From time to time, we have seen that tenacity on the show. I believe Reid turns out OK. Because of Hotch's cruelty, he won't be in the field for a very long time, it ever, but he'll be fine. For the time being, he'll stay with Rossi. Rossi won't baby him as much as Morgan. I'd like to think he'll find a girl, maybe his physical therapist or an old friend, and start a family. Aaron, on the other hand, will have a difficult time dealing with the aftermath. He'll lose the majority of the BAU family he came to love. He will though, eventually find a recovery group. Thanks again for the marvelous story. I'm favoriting you, then going to look on your site for more stories to read. Thanks again. |
marcallie chapter 4 . 7/26/2016 I'm so proud of Reid here. It would have been easier for him to forgive Hotch, to say it was just a mistake and try to go on like nothing happened. I'm sorry you're not writing more. I would love to see the rest of the team supporting Reid, and I really want to know if his leg heals enough for him to walk. Not even a one-year-later one-shot, where he finally contacts Hotch again, or they run into each other? |
fishtrek chapter 3 . 7/26/2016 Love, love this. Well written., great idea. I personally love the relationship of Rossi, father and Reid, son. This story had some of those elements and I loved it. Morgan was great. Hotch got what he deserved. Alcohol is not the answer. Thanks again for a great story. |
MetalWolfMelody chapter 4 . 7/26/2016 I loved seeing Reid's strength emerge like this: he handled the situation perfectly! This was an amazing end to an amazing story, and part of me loves how you didn't drag it out with the healing that could never truly occur between them. Though I have my curiosities, having it left to the imagination is good as well. Fantastic writing: I can't wait to read more from you! |
KiaOraToGube chapter 3 . 7/25/2016 woifhdkjgnf,cgmcgkxzmncsgslkne BEST FANFIC IN AGES this is so cool I can't wait for the next update :) |
SpenceFTW chapter 3 . 7/25/2016 Wow. Spence handled that very well. I loved how he handled that. I love that he made it clear that he was doing it not out of revenge, but because it was better for Hotch. I love that Rossi told him he could come stay with him when he felt too smothered by over protective big bro Morgan lol. I only wish Spence and Hotch has been in a room with a two way mirror with Morgan and Dave on the other side. Morgan would be surprised at how well Reid handled himself. Rossi, I would imagine would be proud of Spencer. I just wonder how Garcia would react to what Hotch did. It would probably shatter her faith that in humanity as well. Of course she'd mother hen Spence like crazy, that's for sure lol. |