Reviews for I Wish
Helena Clara Bouchet chapter 16 . 7/19
Well, it was long and I appreciated the smut that was there ;) Maybe Sarah was right: sex does remedy all. Ha ha ha! I only hope that nothing disturbs their happiness, but we'll see. I like that their intimacy was bonded through magic. That was neat. I liked when Jareth got reacquainted with the Labyrinth, and was not offended when it knocked him down. Most likely, he still got work to do to build up his bond with it again. Good job!
LadyStardustofthe80s chapter 14 . 7/18
You’re perf I love youuuu
AngelGlass chapter 16 . 7/18
Crap I forgot to review lol. Anyway wanted to say I loved this so so so so much and NO THERES NOT TOO MUCH SEX IT WAS AMAZING! I appreciated how Jareth apologized to her and told her he understood why she didn’t say anything, it’s a perfect redemption arc for him and very believable. As always I’m looking forward to what’s next, love you!
Margot Grazyna chapter 16 . 7/17
Nigdy dość czułej miłości. Tych dwoje doszło już do porozumienia z sobą, ciekawe czego żąda Labyrinth, jak ustali się rozkład mocy.
Guest chapter 16 . 7/17
Thank you for updating! This is a sweet chapter can’t wait to see what’s in store!
Guest chapter 15 . 6/15
This was really good! Your writing is amazing!
Margot Grazyna chapter 15 . 6/14
to było takie pełne słodyczy gdy ona go poszukiwała i przyszła do niego ze swoją miłością, a on oszołomiony przyjął wszystko co chciała mu podarować, została między nimi bliskość i wzajemnie poczucie uzupełnienia
Helena Clara Bouchet chapter 15 . 6/14
Okay...let me stop fanning myself. Whew! I wonder if the snowstorm stopped once Jareth and Sarah finally made the BIG leap. *snicker* I liked how you had Jareth's mood to affect the weather in the Underground. I laughed when I read that Jareth caused it to rainstorm for four weeks after losing the Labyrinth to Sarah. Alas, poor Lillium. I kind of have mixed feelings about her, but I felt bad that Jareth's kingdom couldn't get the supplies it needed. Her father could have granted him that! I'm looking forward to the afterglow. Thanks for this chapter and keep up the good work ;)
Guest chapter 15 . 6/14
I'm exhausted! So good!
LadyDragon28 chapter 15 . 6/14
SQUEAL!

That was so sweet, and wonderful! My heart was racing as she confronted him. I got teary eyed when she sweetly confessed to him. Oh I love it all! More! Please!
AngelGlass chapter 15 . 6/14
SO. MANY. EMOTIONS.

Okay first: how the fuck was that your first sex scene? I’ve written a few and nothing was near that! Wow, it was hot and emotional and so sweet!

I really, really want to say how appreciative I am that Lily isn’t a bad person. I feel so sorry for her, poor thing. :( It could be a bit awkward with her hanging around Jareth if (I’m assuming you will do this) she and Aiden get together lol. But it was nice to see Jareth have a decent ex when he’s been such a butt lol. Sarah is wonderful, so young but so strong and fearless. I really felt it when the labyrinth talked to her and she was afraid of rejection. It made her talk Jareth out of that darkness so much more sweet.

As always, I can’t wait for more. Bravo, you’ve turned this story into a true classic!
AngelGlass chapter 14 . 6/14
I’m actually really concerned about Lily. I hated seeing her and Jareth together although that was mostly me being mad at Jareth LOL, I hope she’s okay! Everything looks so bleak and it’s so sad, I hope it gets better soon. On to the next chapter for me!
Guest chapter 14 . 6/12
This is really good I just found it and fell in love!
Margot Grazyna chapter 14 . 6/7
Smutne oddalenie między obojgiem. Sytuacja bez możliwości rozwiązania
LadyDragon28 chapter 14 . 6/6
Omg! I'm loving this story more and more with each chapter! Please! I need moooooore!
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