I'm going through your entire catalog...I'm saving the chapter stories for when I have more time...so its just the one shots for now. I hope somewhere in your catalog is a companion piece to this fic. All my questions need answers.

Gah i love your writing

Nice story thanks for the read

I hope so you can't leave it there I like it when the love story is getting exciting

You wrote a romantic lovestory through an intense and creepy atmosphere and at the end
you led them to find peace and love in each other's arms regardless of the circumstances
that surround them ...
This is what I call unconditional love !
Beautifully and well written story ... bravo as Jane would say !

This was so beautifully written! I lived this story through Lisbon and I could really feel what she was feeling. The rescue part was great! And I love how you wrote the relationship between Jane and Lisbon! Excellent story! Thank you!

very well written! :)

It's just beautifully sad, Lisbon's vision and everything that happened to and I want to cry to myself too :( anyways, great job you have here :) always loved you stories.

I hope you continue. You left way too many questions unanswered. Great story.

I love this .please continue .thanks .

Lovely story. I'm in two minds whether I'd like another chapter as I liked the ending so much but you know I'll read it and undoubtedly love it if you do write one.

Yes! You have to contimue . This is amazing. I love everyting about it. Theres a balance between dark and light in this story that reads so well to me. Your writing is phenomenal. I'd love it if you continued :)

This was such a fascinating read. I absolutely loved Lisbon here, and I have to admit I completely invested my feelings in her while reading; I felt genuine relief when she was rescued, and worry about her regaining her eyesight. The relationship between Jane and Lisbon was so beautifully depicted! And yes, there might be a lot of unanswered questions, but I really don't think less of the story because of it; to me, this wasn't so much about what happens to Red John, but about Jane and Lisbon realizing where they stand regarding each other and their relationship ― although it'd be great, of course, if you decided to continue this!

This was so well constructed, so beautifully written! I usually like closure in my endings but I agree with you, there's beauty in them facing an uncertain future together. That said, I'd eagerly read a continuation! This story was creepy and intense and heartbreaking and sweet by turns, making a brilliant whole. Bravo!

Please! Continue!